Comments | lady_flamewing: Practice Makes Perfect (Kurama/Yusuke, PG-13)

lady_flamewing

Practice Makes Perfect (Kurama/Yusuke, PG-13)

Sep 28, 2009 16:53

Title: Practice Makes Perfect
Fandom: Yu Yu Hakusho
Pairing: Kurama/Yusuke - with side notes of Yusuke/Keiko.
Rating: PG-13, for suggestiveness.
A/N: Written in a total hurry to make my 30_kisses deadline. I so suck at doing those in any kind of timely fashion.

( 'Again, Yusuke,' Kurama commands softly, and as if that weren't enough, he makes an oddly inviting motion with one of his hands. )

Comments 4

forgottencarols September 29 2009, 01:25:34 UTC

I just love how it fools the reader into assuming its something naughty rather than harmless.

lady_flamewing September 29 2009, 03:42:36 UTC

I did love that. This sort of just meandered its way into my head, and at first, I was just going to have it simply be Kurama trying to teach Yusuke English. And then, as it started to get going, I realized how suggestive it could be, if one were reading it in the right mindset.

So I ran with it. I'm actually rather pleased with it, though it is awfully short.

forgottencarols September 29 2009, 18:34:26 UTC

This is just further evidence of a writer's mind of being totally evil but made of win.

These type of fictions are fun to read.

lady_flamewing September 29 2009, 19:53:46 UTC

I felt like I needed something sort of short, sweet, and silly, to make up for all the rather down pieces I've been writing recently.

Not that I don't love the down pieces. There's just something about a good piece of post-apocalyptic fic...