Gambling Debts 24/?

[lady_emebalia]

Chapter 24

Derek died four times.

He couldn't sit still with his butt still throbbing and he couldn't really focus on anything than that deep ache in his muscles but he did manage to not die too often in the game they were playing. He didn't even know what they were playing, some kind of shooter, and he didn't really care.

Comments

Stiles leaned in and kissed his fangs.

[dickensgal31]

I just love this story! I'm sorry I've not been commenting! I've been super busy, I'm sure you know how that is! But I'm a writer too and I know how much I love hearing from my readers! So, I had some time off this morning and I just caught up on the last 5 chapters and then I had this brand new, hot off the presses update! This is just a wonderful story... love it!

I love the way you're showing a healthy consensual D/S relationship! I adore the way Stiles is with Derek. And this Derek, vulnerable but not weak. And he's scared, too and scarred... and Stiles is just perfect for him.

I have to say that Scott... oy! What a turd he was to Stiles... how could he not trust his friend. But I did like that he was looking out for Derek. I'm interested to know a bit more about Isaac. Any chance we'll get a bit of backstory on him? I hope so... he's not usually one of my faves, but I like him in this story!

Well, that's it for now. Maybe I can catch up on Human is just a word too...
Thanks for two fantastic fics! Good stuff,

Re: Stiles leaned in and kissed his fangs.

[lady_emebalia]

Thank you for this lovely review.
Stiles is a good dom and the best thing that ever happened to Derek.

Scott doesn't understand this lifestyle. He give Stiles the benefit of the doubt but he just can't wrap his head around the idea that people actually like it.

I'm not sure how much of Isaac's story we're going to get. He hasn't told me much either.