Fic: Something Sweet

[labarcelona]

 Title: Something Sweet
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: PG
Words: Just under 1800
Year: Summer before 7th year.
Warning: A little bit fluffy, I suppose. My first fic, sort of. Go easy on me? :D
Summary: On a rainy summer day, the boys find that it is not so bad spending the day inside.
Disclaimer: I only wish I invented them. They aren't mine.

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Comments

[remuslives23]

Oh, I loved it! Loved the swapping POV's, and the overlapping of each sequence. Adored that kiss... Gorgeous. :)

[labarcelona]

Why thank you very much! I'm glad you liked the swapping POVs, I'm still a little worried about it, like a million years later. xP; I'm glad you liked the kiss, too, though it could never up to the caliber of yours. I bow to your boykissing awesomeness. That sounded less lame in my head, I assure you.

[remuslives23]

Not lame at all! Of course, you are complimenting me so I'd forgive you just about anything right now! :)

I've gotten to the point with my writing where I know in my head that it's not horrid, but all ever seem to see are the mistakes, or the things I wish I'd done differently. So I know how you feel - still worrying if your style was right or if you should have done it differently...

It was, and no you shouldn't have! :)

[labarcelona]

I suppose that's the peril of being a writer. You're a director sort of, and you see it in your head so perfectly, but it never turns out quite right. I suppose that's also why everyone's their own worst critic. But that's the fun part, too, I guess. Trying to project your minds eye to other people as best you can.