Story in the Making [2/?]

[la_luciernaga]

So both chapters so far seem to both hover just about a thousand words. The way I had originally written this out was very basic scenes that covered what I wanted to get across as only my soulmate was going to read it. Since she asked me to post these on livejournal, I lengthened them all; what had initially been about 300-600 words per section

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[kapike]

I really enjoyed this chapter as well. OMG! I love, love, love, love, love how Daehyun calls Youngjae precious boy! I love that it slipped out without him even meaning to say it. I also love that they cuddled up in bed together since the thunder was upsetting Youngjae! I really loved this.