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la_luciernaga

Story in the Making [9/?]

May 12, 2014 03:19

Chapters are finally getting longer like I said they would. Things are also picking up more. xD

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( When Daehyun spoke, all six of them looked over to the man who had otherwise been sitting silently while watching TV with Youngjae. None of them spoke as they had no idea what Daehyun was trying to say or allude to. )

genre: romance, pairing: daejae, genre: friendship, status: work in progress, type: chaptered, title: sitm, rating: pg-13, group: b.a.p.

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<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 kapike May 12 2014, 16:31:03 UTC

Oh hoho! I could see why you love this chapter! I think this is my favourite chapter so far! I love all of them a lot but this one is a extra special. I was surprised at daehyun being the one to get a girlfriend. Here I was thinking it was going to be Youngjae and Daehyun would then realize that he likes Youngjae. This way is cool too. I do love how with Youngjae being sick all of Daehyun's thoughts immediately are towards Youngjae. Becasue Youngjae is so important to him even if he hasn't fully realised how important Youngjae is to him. I love, love, love the ending! With Youngjae waking up later to Daehyun in bed with him. OH I LOVE YOU! I'm so, so, so happy I sumbled upon this. You have no IDEA how happy I am. This is such an amazing story. Oh, and I loooove all the little banglo moments you put in here. That made me extra happy. Yongguk pulling Junhong into his lap, Junhong speaking up and his voice cracking a little, leading to Yongguk smiling and holding him tighter. Also, Junhong blushing a bit more than usual and ( ... )

Hehe kapike May 12 2014, 16:33:00 UTC

Oh! I forgot to add that I laughed when Himchan leaned over and started to ask Daehyun something which Daehyun promptly told him that if he was going to ask what he thought Himchan would ask he would hit him! :)

Re: Hehe la_luciernaga May 12 2014, 16:43:31 UTC

Reading your comments always puts a huge smile on my face and I swear I might have had a bit of a gummy smile going on. You are adorable and I love that you love my story so much. xD Your comments easily brighten my mood and help make my day. Thanks so much for your dedication and I love how you notice all the little things that aren't even important to the Daejae storyline, like the banglo moments and all. Banglo is my OTP and they get all the love, man! <3