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la_luciernaga

Story in the Making [6/?]

May 04, 2014 00:26

Fluff, fluff and lots more fluff. Daejae fluff is the most perf, kay?

Previous Chapter

( Tipping his head back, the elder man rested it against the concrete wall and looked up to the sky that was taking on a beautiful orange and pink hue that evening. He didn’t mind sitting here until Youngjae woke. )

genre: romance, pairing: daejae, genre: friendship, status: work in progress, type: chaptered, rating: pg, title: sitm, group: b.a.p.

Comments 4

oxoxox kapike May 5 2014, 17:27:56 UTC

IT WAS SO FLUFFY! All the fluff! I love how it is Himchan and Youngjae that sometimes butt heads. But Daehyun is always there to give loving support to Youngjae and to make him feel better. I also really like how Yongguk is looking out for Junhong and that he punches Himchan for whatever stupid thing he said. I think it is cute too, that Youngjae is looking out for Junhong as well. The part where Youngjae kept hitting Daehyun made me laugh. This was another great little chapter and I am looking forward to the next one very, very much! Thanks so much for writing and sharing this!

(btw, you spelled Junhong's name wrong in the story.)

Re: oxoxox la_luciernaga May 5 2014, 23:37:45 UTC

Fluff is what I aim for!! The fact that Himchan and Youngjae butt heads is a really important fact in this story and you'll see in the upcoming chapters. And never look past the Banglo that it's there for it's my OTP, in all honesty. xD

Thank YOU so much for reading and commenting. <3

[I looked through the chapter and all I found was the instance of "jundola", which is an affectionate term. Did I misspell it elsewhere? :( ]

Re: oxoxox kapike May 6 2014, 02:40:00 UTC

Ah. Silly me then. I didn't realize that Jundola was an affectionate term. Then you didn't spell anything wrong. Banglo is my favorite pairing. I love, love daejae and Himup so much as well but I cannot read Yongguk or Junhong with anyone else! Silly me.

Re: oxoxox la_luciernaga May 6 2014, 02:47:43 UTC

Don't even worry about it, hun! We can't expect to know everything--I'm certainly not even a bit fluent in Korean and so know things here and there.

Banglo is my OTP and so is Daejae...and Himup. But I agree with you there. Banghim are a brotp but Junhong and Yongguk can only be with one another.