[hmd] critique

[la_grand_vie]

To French? Not French enough? Want to see something or think I'm not portraying something right? Here is the place to tell my loves, I'll activate anon posting and you can feel free to tell me how you feel, whether good or bad, hmm? It may be a little early~ but feel free to post here anytime and I will be sure to read it. Merci bien mes belles ~

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OTL I'M NOT HELPFUL AT ALL

[lizzypan]

So, I know that we've only done about 3 posts of interaction OTL but I figured I might as well give you some critique since you seemed so desperate to get some.

I think that you have no overall problems with Francis. He's cheesy, suave and a good friend. I like how you've taken him and you know that I adore his app so much. Here's just a few little things I can find to critique, but most of them are mun's personal judgement and should be taken lightly.

The French accent entering his speech and pronunciation is very endearing, but after so many 'eet's and 'zat's it gets a touch annoying. But really, I shouldn't call it annoying, it's more a matter of something that's kind of hard to read for me. Granted, this isn't even a character trait and it's just this one mun's preference, you don't need to take much notice of it.

I think that... even though he has more worldly experience, Francis can afford to be a little more loose with his friends, and a little less motherly. He is the most motherly and more often than not, exasperated of

;3; ilu meru

[la_grand_vie]

CRITIQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~

I-I am very glad to hear you like my characterization of Francis /3/- I've had to work on him, and he's the most comfortable character to play for me so it's nice to know I don't completely ruin the character :'D

I've actually been wondering about the accent. Because personally? It bugs me too- normally I only 'accentize 'ze' and 'zat' and I'm done with it, but since I made it so important to be a fact I wanted to keep it up- BUT IT'S ANNOYING. So you will most likely be seeing less of it at very least and more descriptive ways to say you can probably barely understand him if you actually heard him~

;3; I've been wanting to get him out like that more... But I think my own personality and mothering instinct got in the way OTL. BUT DEFINITELY. Oh God. Meru, ma cheré. Just wait until the BTT BACHELOR PAD. <3

I love you darling.

Will you have my children~?

me too, bb <33333

[lizzypan]

Ruin the character? No no no, he's a wonderful Francis and probably the most life-like one I've seen on roleplay communities, which really makes me happy because I like non-2D characters. :'D

And I WILL BE WAITING EAGERLY FOR THIS "PAD". OH-SO-EAGERLY. ;__; D-don't disappoint me, preez. ♥

Oui. Oui oui oui oui.