un regalo per seiskink69

Oct 06, 2008 07:21

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characters/pairings: Suggested Hibari/Ryohei.
rating: T
warnings: shounen-ai
wordcount: 1, 058

summary: The day Ryohei joins the boxing club is the day he meets Hibari, all woolen-tempered and standalone.
notes: I can’t remember the word for “love of the sea”.

and the day the rules are explained to him in bright, green ink )

r:seiskink69, t:bl, c:ryohei, c:hibari

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pekori October 5 2008, 20:51:33 UTC
This has beautiful voice in it. o_o

The tempo, meter, vocabulary... all of this was really breathtaking. I really appreciated the observations on subtle things, how important they seemed; that really seemed like Hibari to me. He wouldn't be paying attention to Ryouhei as a whole because he doesn't need to.

I'm sticking this in my memories. Fantastic job, dear.

Also the idea of Hibari napping is sort of adorable beyond words. XD

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dame_batsie October 5 2008, 21:04:34 UTC
My favorite couple! And I love it to pieces! I love how fluidly and poetically it's written. Beautiful.

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seiskink69 October 6 2008, 11:35:40 UTC
I love how the scene is written! And lol, Italian in the end? Thank you very much, there's too lil fics of these two interacting!

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seiskink69 October 7 2008, 09:58:45 UTC
Heyhey, if you are the writer....remember we have to keep this thing anonymous for now ^^;

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demoerin October 8 2008, 15:12:50 UTC
The writing is beautiful, all poetic and soft in spite of the fact that it's about Hibari beating the bejeezus out of Ryohei. I really like it as a representation of Hibari's thoughts.

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