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l_s_d_me

fic: the shooting stops

Oct 12, 2010 12:17

Title: The shooting stops
Author: l_s_d_me
Pairing: Brad/Nate
Rating: R
Word Count: 2800
Disclaimer: Based on portrayals from Generation Kill and has no base in reality.
Notes: Must thank the lovely meeks00 for the beta and for forcing me to post this no matter what. Any errors you see are all mine bc I like to leave traces around that the world is imperfect… ( Read more... )

author: l_s_d_me

Comments 29

emerald_skies October 12 2010, 17:47:19 UTC

Ooh, I like the idea of them making a game of it! And also the end (oh boys *smishes*) Good stuff all around, basically :D

l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 03:44:54 UTC

THANKS!!! It was initially going to more of an actual game/them having fun with it... but i don't really feel like it turned out that way, lol.

emerald_skies October 13 2010, 03:46:29 UTC

You mean in the sense of more teasing? Well, that's something I'dve liked to see, but that's another idea for another day. This one worked out fine just the way it is <3

l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 03:51:39 UTC

yeah that's exactly what i mean. but yes, haha, for another day! (now that i've officially popped my brad/nate cherry)

alasse October 12 2010, 18:26:18 UTC

The tension in the first section was amaaazing, and, god, the end was gorgeous. The final line just killed me. Lovely!

l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 03:45:17 UTC

ahhh thank you ♥ those are my favourite bits as well.

justaotherwitch October 12 2010, 22:05:02 UTC

This is gorgeous and hot and the tension is perfect.

l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 03:47:04 UTC

thank you so much!!!!!! I really really like your icon btw.

mcl4r3n October 13 2010, 01:54:04 UTC

\o/

OMG, the endiiiiiiiing!!! ♥

l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 03:48:10 UTC

*blushes* I love flaily arms more than anything. I'm so glad you like the ending!! (i love it too /biased)

durtydeefla82 October 13 2010, 02:29:21 UTC

Hooo BOY! That melted my brain! So much incredible everything!! WOW! I love everything u do. =D

l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 03:50:25 UTC

Two things:

1. thank you x10 *hugs*

2. omfg i'm such a bad friend because i forgot to tell you that i read your j2 that weekend you asked me to, but had to rush off right after i finished and forgot to comment!!! ahhhhh!!! I'm so sorry bc i just remembered about it! i suck. I liked it a lot, it was super dirty (which i appreciate, lolol) and i just thought all around a sweet ride.

durtydeefla82 October 13 2010, 04:04:26 UTC

=D Its all good and there's a part two coming when I find my muse... she is hiding today.

l_s_d_me October 13 2010, 04:17:04 UTC

oh i totally get that. mine hides for weeks at a time.