Of Dares and Comas [Chapter One]
Tite: Of Dares and Comas
Pairing: YooSu and YunJae
Length: Prologue + 0/12 chapters
Genre: Drama, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Minor cussing and suggestive thoughts... Not much of anything in this chapter er, prologue... :\
Summary:Four different young men, with different cliques and personalities, are dared to spend the night in a supposed haunted house. They can't stand one another, but a mysterious, young orphaned boy living in the old house prompts them to set aside their differences to care for him.
And introducing my secondary characters. (I have one I forgot to include, but oh well. LOL I'll just post his pic when I bring him in!!)
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Chapter One
Yoochun knew it was weird to experience yellow vision, especially so early in the morning, as he opened his eyes. He reached up and snatched the post it note that had been stuck to his forehead most likely by his brother. Just as he thought, the chicken scratch told him it was from his younger brother.
'Hey! So, mom had to go to the grocery store today and she asked me to write you a note before I went to school, so here it is. I'm not sure what I was supposed to write, since I forgot... but whatever. Go eat and get to school! You have to pull up your grades if you want your art classes back!'
Yoochun almost glared at the last two sentences before crumpling up the post-it note, hoping his brother would trip and fall on his face and get laughed at, but he took it back and decided that he'd get his brother for it later. Vengeance was better in person anyway.
So he got up and did as his brother said, but in his own way. He grabbed a piece of toast and then walked to school without the intent to actually attend. It was funny to prank the teachers and Yoochun had just the idea what to do today.
He liked getting detention because he could spend more time working on his painting, that is, if he could sneak away from the detention teacher.
The day had been going well so far, except for Yoochun's run-in with Changmin during 3rd period when Yoochun was supposed to be in advanced history. Yoochun had greeted him with an unpleasant glare and some rude words, but dammit if the little nerd didn't scare him off by jumping at him.
Yoochun smirked as he spied the bright red fire alarm on the wall. Why not give the whole school a scare? It would surely land him with some free time to paint while the teachers tried to figure out who was missing. He walked towards it and placed his fingers on the trigger...
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“Finally!” Changmin sighed to himself as Yunho rounded the corner at the end of the hall and made his way to the younger male. Changmin uncrossed his arms, reaching down to grabbing his bag from the floor, and made his way to Yunho. “Ready for your lesson now?”
Yunho looked at him and nodded, still distracted with his thoughts of Jaejoong. He still couldn't understand why he seemed to hate him so much. It was weird and Yunho pouted visibly, causing Changmin to quirk an eyebrow at him.
“Uh, yeah. In the library?” Yunho questioned in return. Changmin just nodded and they slowly made their way to the school's library. They didn't talk to each other... it was already awkward being a jock and a nerd walking together, talking wasn't necessary.
Further down the hallway, Yunho and Changmin rounded the corner to see Yoochun with his hand on the fire alarm. Changmin frowned and Yunho walked forward.
“Hey! You know you're not supposed to do that!” Yunho yelled at Yoochun. As soon as he spoke, Yunho saw Jaejoong at the end of the hallway at his locker. His eyes widened, leaving Yoochun's still frame, while he watched Jaejoong grab his books.
“You're catching flies,” Changmin spoke flatly, rolling his eyes at Yunho's lovesick eyes.
Jaejoong glanced down the hallway and spied all three males. He turned his head and stuck his nose up in the air, proving just how prissy he was. Yunho started to walk towards Jaejoong when the alarm sounded, its shrill noise filling the hallways.
Yunho's eyes landed on Yoochun just as the rebel lifted his middle finger and stuck his tongue out at Yunho and Changmin. Yunho started towards Yoochun only to be knocked around and lost in the sea of students as the swarmed the hall to get out of the building.
Teachers were shouting amongst the noise, “Orderly fashion, students!! Please proceed in a calm and orderly fashion!” But they were ignored and knocked to the side as everyone exited the building from different locations and as quickly as possible.
Yunho exited calmly, glaring the whole time. 'Just you wait Yoochun. Your ass is grass when I find you.' Yunho promised.
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After the alarm was proved false and blamed on technical error, the students all returned to class. The students were happy to find out that it was already lunch time when they returned to the building, so the teachers had no choice but to allow the students their lunch. So, grade by grade, the students slowly got their lunches.
Yunho and Jaejoong bumped into each other trying to get to the lunch trays. Yunho smiled and almost jumped for joy at finally getting a chance to be close to Jaejoong, “Jaejoong--”
“Don't speak to me.” Jaejoong replied coolly, grabbing a tray of food and walking to his table where his two best friends Heechul and Ryeowook were sitting. As he set his tray on the table however, Yunho - who had followed him - grabbed his shoulder and whirled him around. “Hey! What's your problem!?”
“I think the real question is: what is your problem?” Yunho ground out, his grip on Jaejoong's shoulder tightening. He was tired of the feminine man running from him every time he asked, this time he was going to get an answer.
“I don't have time to answer your dumb questions.” Jaejoong spat, trying to jerk his shoulder away, only to have Yunho place his other hand on Jaejoong's free shoulder, successfully holding him in place. Ryeowook watched in surprise while Heechul looked up for a second before returning to his lunch.
“Aren't you going to do something?” Ryeowook whispered to Heechul. The latter shrugged and shook his head. “Yunho was your boyfriend!”
“That's right, he was, he's not anymore.” Heechul replied, scooting a few chairs down from Ryeowook so the younger male would stop questioning him. Ryeowook could only watch as a verbal tennis match began between Yunho and Jaejoong, neither one relenting on anything.
“Do you realize how stupid it is to treat people like you do?” Yunho quirked an eyebrow at Jaejoong. The black haired prep frowned and pushed Yunho backwards, but he only stumbled and bumped into someone who had been walking past behind him.
The sound of something splattering on the ground made Yunho jump forward and whirl around just in time to see Yoochun kick his fallen tray across the floor. A fist was raised in Yunho's direction, but before it landed against the jock's cheek, two teachers reacted and grabbed both Yoochun and Yunho.
Yoochun snatched his arm away from the male teacher and glared at Yunho and Jaejoong before walking out of the cafeteria. Yunho pulled his own arm away from from the teacher holding him and sighed.
“I'm not finished with you yet.” Yunho leaned down and whispered to Jaejoong, who had just sat down.
“I have nothing more to say to you.” Jaejoong huffed, beginning to eat while Yunho walked away to blow off some steam.
Changmin watched as the whole thing took place from his own table where he sat with his two best friends, Kibum and Yesung. He was distracted with watching someone from Jaejoong's table to notice a hand as it began to wave frantically in front of his face.
“Changmin?”
He jumped and looked towards Kibum, who sat back into his seat and grinned.
“I have a dare for you.” He spoke calmly while Changmin just raised an eyebrow interestedly.
“Really? What is it?” Changmin blinked.
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“A dare?” Yoochun raised an eyebrow at the two members of his “clique”, Donghae and Leeteuk as they stopped him in the hallways. He folded his arms across his chest and sighed, “Alright, alright... What is it?”
Donghae and Leeteuk smirked at one another and began to explain. What they didn't tell him was that this was a plan to get the whole clique groups to fade. They were tired of hiding their friendship with Ryeowook, Kibum and Kangin.
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At the soccer fields, Yunho was kicking the black and white ball angrily. He could have had Yoochun then! He could have gotten the answers he wanted from Jaejoong as well, but those teachers just had to interrupt.
He was caught by surprise when Kangin walked in front of him and kicked the ball into the goal behind Yunho. Yunho grinned and approached Kangin, “What's up, Kangin?”
“I want to give you a dare... but I don't know if you can handle it...” Kangin spoke in feigned cautiousness. He knew he would get Yunho to agree to the dare like this.
“What do you take me for? Give it to me, I'll do anything.” Yunho replied with a proud grin.
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“I dare you to go into a haunted house and spend the night there...” Ryeowook finished his statement. Jaejoong held his fork up to his lips, but didn't eat the bite of food as he stared at Ryeowook in shock.
“Where did this come from?” Jaejoong scoffed out, finally eating once again. Ryeowook sighed and pouted.
“Come on, hyung.” Ryeowook began, “Its not like you have something better to do...”
Jaejoong opened his mouth to say something, but Ryeowook quickly added, “And if you can go through with the dare, I'll take you shopping.”
Jaejoong's mouth closed and he pondered this for a moment.
“Okay. I'll do it.”
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There a faint beeping echoing in the old house and it was beginning to irritate the only person who was inside - Junsu. It had started out a simple beep every now and then, but now it was accompanied by other noises, most of them creepier than the last. Junsu shivered as he huddled in a corner of what looked to be the living room.
Junsu didn't know where he was, or how he'd gotten here, but he was sure that he didn't live here. The house was old and decaying on the inside, from what Junsu could see considering he hadn't tried to move since he'd woken up hours ago. He knew he needed to move, but he was scared; Junsu didn't know what would happen if he stood, he could go tumbling through the rotten floor!
Junsu sighed and chanced standing up; alas, nothing happened and he nearly jumped for joy, but he managed to contain himself as he cautiously took a step. Again, nothing and Junsu was elated so he began walking around the house, attempting to find where the awful noises were coming from.
Upon taking a closer look at the house, it wasn't as bad as he initially thought and could almost swear someone could have been living in it not long ago - 'Who knows, they might still be here and that could be the source of the noises!' Junsu grinned triumphantly, thinking he had figured a huge mystery out.
As he explored the abandoned house, hoping for some sign of life, he was disheartened to find no one and no apparent reason for any noises. It was just an old house and it could be making any number of noises for no particular reason.
A loud hiss of air made Junsu jump up off the the old dusty couch that looked in good condition, and soon more beeping noises followed after the first spooky noise. Junsu pouted visibly and wanted to curl up and cry; out of irritation or sadness, Junsu didn't know or particularly care... He just felt like crying.
After a bit the noises stopped and were replaced with the voices of people and that made Junsu's heart rate quicken. He wondered if it was the owner of the house who had kidnapped him and was coming back to have his way with poor Junsu, but Junsu pushed that idea out of his head as he had looked in the refrigerator a few moments ago only to find it empty; thereby proving that no one lived in the old house.
'Unless they're cannibals... which would make me--' Junsu cut himself off, jumping off the couch quickly as he heard a door open somewhere in the house and then voices. Now he had to either hide... or face his fate to become eaten.
Junsu squeaked and ran into a random room in the house to hide from the voices that were now getting closer.
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A/N: Okay, okay... I'm sorry for so many scene changes again. There will be some more in the next chapter, but they won't be as bad. =)
Anyway, please comment and let me know if this is still good~!
Pairing: YooSu and YunJae
Length: Prologue + 0/12 chapters
Genre: Drama, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Minor cussing and suggestive thoughts... Not much of anything in this chapter er, prologue... :\
Summary:Four different young men, with different cliques and personalities, are dared to spend the night in a supposed haunted house. They can't stand one another, but a mysterious, young orphaned boy living in the old house prompts them to set aside their differences to care for him.
And introducing my secondary characters. (I have one I forgot to include, but oh well. LOL I'll just post his pic when I bring him in!!)
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Chapter One
Yoochun knew it was weird to experience yellow vision, especially so early in the morning, as he opened his eyes. He reached up and snatched the post it note that had been stuck to his forehead most likely by his brother. Just as he thought, the chicken scratch told him it was from his younger brother.
'Hey! So, mom had to go to the grocery store today and she asked me to write you a note before I went to school, so here it is. I'm not sure what I was supposed to write, since I forgot... but whatever. Go eat and get to school! You have to pull up your grades if you want your art classes back!'
Yoochun almost glared at the last two sentences before crumpling up the post-it note, hoping his brother would trip and fall on his face and get laughed at, but he took it back and decided that he'd get his brother for it later. Vengeance was better in person anyway.
So he got up and did as his brother said, but in his own way. He grabbed a piece of toast and then walked to school without the intent to actually attend. It was funny to prank the teachers and Yoochun had just the idea what to do today.
He liked getting detention because he could spend more time working on his painting, that is, if he could sneak away from the detention teacher.
The day had been going well so far, except for Yoochun's run-in with Changmin during 3rd period when Yoochun was supposed to be in advanced history. Yoochun had greeted him with an unpleasant glare and some rude words, but dammit if the little nerd didn't scare him off by jumping at him.
Yoochun smirked as he spied the bright red fire alarm on the wall. Why not give the whole school a scare? It would surely land him with some free time to paint while the teachers tried to figure out who was missing. He walked towards it and placed his fingers on the trigger...
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“Finally!” Changmin sighed to himself as Yunho rounded the corner at the end of the hall and made his way to the younger male. Changmin uncrossed his arms, reaching down to grabbing his bag from the floor, and made his way to Yunho. “Ready for your lesson now?”
Yunho looked at him and nodded, still distracted with his thoughts of Jaejoong. He still couldn't understand why he seemed to hate him so much. It was weird and Yunho pouted visibly, causing Changmin to quirk an eyebrow at him.
“Uh, yeah. In the library?” Yunho questioned in return. Changmin just nodded and they slowly made their way to the school's library. They didn't talk to each other... it was already awkward being a jock and a nerd walking together, talking wasn't necessary.
Further down the hallway, Yunho and Changmin rounded the corner to see Yoochun with his hand on the fire alarm. Changmin frowned and Yunho walked forward.
“Hey! You know you're not supposed to do that!” Yunho yelled at Yoochun. As soon as he spoke, Yunho saw Jaejoong at the end of the hallway at his locker. His eyes widened, leaving Yoochun's still frame, while he watched Jaejoong grab his books.
“You're catching flies,” Changmin spoke flatly, rolling his eyes at Yunho's lovesick eyes.
Jaejoong glanced down the hallway and spied all three males. He turned his head and stuck his nose up in the air, proving just how prissy he was. Yunho started to walk towards Jaejoong when the alarm sounded, its shrill noise filling the hallways.
Yunho's eyes landed on Yoochun just as the rebel lifted his middle finger and stuck his tongue out at Yunho and Changmin. Yunho started towards Yoochun only to be knocked around and lost in the sea of students as the swarmed the hall to get out of the building.
Teachers were shouting amongst the noise, “Orderly fashion, students!! Please proceed in a calm and orderly fashion!” But they were ignored and knocked to the side as everyone exited the building from different locations and as quickly as possible.
Yunho exited calmly, glaring the whole time. 'Just you wait Yoochun. Your ass is grass when I find you.' Yunho promised.
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After the alarm was proved false and blamed on technical error, the students all returned to class. The students were happy to find out that it was already lunch time when they returned to the building, so the teachers had no choice but to allow the students their lunch. So, grade by grade, the students slowly got their lunches.
Yunho and Jaejoong bumped into each other trying to get to the lunch trays. Yunho smiled and almost jumped for joy at finally getting a chance to be close to Jaejoong, “Jaejoong--”
“Don't speak to me.” Jaejoong replied coolly, grabbing a tray of food and walking to his table where his two best friends Heechul and Ryeowook were sitting. As he set his tray on the table however, Yunho - who had followed him - grabbed his shoulder and whirled him around. “Hey! What's your problem!?”
“I think the real question is: what is your problem?” Yunho ground out, his grip on Jaejoong's shoulder tightening. He was tired of the feminine man running from him every time he asked, this time he was going to get an answer.
“I don't have time to answer your dumb questions.” Jaejoong spat, trying to jerk his shoulder away, only to have Yunho place his other hand on Jaejoong's free shoulder, successfully holding him in place. Ryeowook watched in surprise while Heechul looked up for a second before returning to his lunch.
“Aren't you going to do something?” Ryeowook whispered to Heechul. The latter shrugged and shook his head. “Yunho was your boyfriend!”
“That's right, he was, he's not anymore.” Heechul replied, scooting a few chairs down from Ryeowook so the younger male would stop questioning him. Ryeowook could only watch as a verbal tennis match began between Yunho and Jaejoong, neither one relenting on anything.
“Do you realize how stupid it is to treat people like you do?” Yunho quirked an eyebrow at Jaejoong. The black haired prep frowned and pushed Yunho backwards, but he only stumbled and bumped into someone who had been walking past behind him.
The sound of something splattering on the ground made Yunho jump forward and whirl around just in time to see Yoochun kick his fallen tray across the floor. A fist was raised in Yunho's direction, but before it landed against the jock's cheek, two teachers reacted and grabbed both Yoochun and Yunho.
Yoochun snatched his arm away from the male teacher and glared at Yunho and Jaejoong before walking out of the cafeteria. Yunho pulled his own arm away from from the teacher holding him and sighed.
“I'm not finished with you yet.” Yunho leaned down and whispered to Jaejoong, who had just sat down.
“I have nothing more to say to you.” Jaejoong huffed, beginning to eat while Yunho walked away to blow off some steam.
Changmin watched as the whole thing took place from his own table where he sat with his two best friends, Kibum and Yesung. He was distracted with watching someone from Jaejoong's table to notice a hand as it began to wave frantically in front of his face.
“Changmin?”
He jumped and looked towards Kibum, who sat back into his seat and grinned.
“I have a dare for you.” He spoke calmly while Changmin just raised an eyebrow interestedly.
“Really? What is it?” Changmin blinked.
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“A dare?” Yoochun raised an eyebrow at the two members of his “clique”, Donghae and Leeteuk as they stopped him in the hallways. He folded his arms across his chest and sighed, “Alright, alright... What is it?”
Donghae and Leeteuk smirked at one another and began to explain. What they didn't tell him was that this was a plan to get the whole clique groups to fade. They were tired of hiding their friendship with Ryeowook, Kibum and Kangin.
(~*~)
At the soccer fields, Yunho was kicking the black and white ball angrily. He could have had Yoochun then! He could have gotten the answers he wanted from Jaejoong as well, but those teachers just had to interrupt.
He was caught by surprise when Kangin walked in front of him and kicked the ball into the goal behind Yunho. Yunho grinned and approached Kangin, “What's up, Kangin?”
“I want to give you a dare... but I don't know if you can handle it...” Kangin spoke in feigned cautiousness. He knew he would get Yunho to agree to the dare like this.
“What do you take me for? Give it to me, I'll do anything.” Yunho replied with a proud grin.
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“I dare you to go into a haunted house and spend the night there...” Ryeowook finished his statement. Jaejoong held his fork up to his lips, but didn't eat the bite of food as he stared at Ryeowook in shock.
“Where did this come from?” Jaejoong scoffed out, finally eating once again. Ryeowook sighed and pouted.
“Come on, hyung.” Ryeowook began, “Its not like you have something better to do...”
Jaejoong opened his mouth to say something, but Ryeowook quickly added, “And if you can go through with the dare, I'll take you shopping.”
Jaejoong's mouth closed and he pondered this for a moment.
“Okay. I'll do it.”
(~*~)
There a faint beeping echoing in the old house and it was beginning to irritate the only person who was inside - Junsu. It had started out a simple beep every now and then, but now it was accompanied by other noises, most of them creepier than the last. Junsu shivered as he huddled in a corner of what looked to be the living room.
Junsu didn't know where he was, or how he'd gotten here, but he was sure that he didn't live here. The house was old and decaying on the inside, from what Junsu could see considering he hadn't tried to move since he'd woken up hours ago. He knew he needed to move, but he was scared; Junsu didn't know what would happen if he stood, he could go tumbling through the rotten floor!
Junsu sighed and chanced standing up; alas, nothing happened and he nearly jumped for joy, but he managed to contain himself as he cautiously took a step. Again, nothing and Junsu was elated so he began walking around the house, attempting to find where the awful noises were coming from.
Upon taking a closer look at the house, it wasn't as bad as he initially thought and could almost swear someone could have been living in it not long ago - 'Who knows, they might still be here and that could be the source of the noises!' Junsu grinned triumphantly, thinking he had figured a huge mystery out.
As he explored the abandoned house, hoping for some sign of life, he was disheartened to find no one and no apparent reason for any noises. It was just an old house and it could be making any number of noises for no particular reason.
A loud hiss of air made Junsu jump up off the the old dusty couch that looked in good condition, and soon more beeping noises followed after the first spooky noise. Junsu pouted visibly and wanted to curl up and cry; out of irritation or sadness, Junsu didn't know or particularly care... He just felt like crying.
After a bit the noises stopped and were replaced with the voices of people and that made Junsu's heart rate quicken. He wondered if it was the owner of the house who had kidnapped him and was coming back to have his way with poor Junsu, but Junsu pushed that idea out of his head as he had looked in the refrigerator a few moments ago only to find it empty; thereby proving that no one lived in the old house.
'Unless they're cannibals... which would make me--' Junsu cut himself off, jumping off the couch quickly as he heard a door open somewhere in the house and then voices. Now he had to either hide... or face his fate to become eaten.
Junsu squeaked and ran into a random room in the house to hide from the voices that were now getting closer.
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A/N: Okay, okay... I'm sorry for so many scene changes again. There will be some more in the next chapter, but they won't be as bad. =)
Anyway, please comment and let me know if this is still good~!