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l3petitemort

Unfinished Business

Aug 11, 2010 16:28

Title: Unfinished Business
Pairing/Characters: Elle & Reid, past Elle/Reid
Rating: PG13
Words: ~2700
Summary: Four years after Elle leaves the BAU, she runs into Reid & takes stock of what's changed -- and what hasn't.
Warnings: Just some language & innuendo. Excessive diner use? Whatever.
Notes: You should probably read The Cure first (it's 200 ( Read more... )

pairing: elle/reid, category: gen, character: spencer reid, character: elle greenaway, rating: pg13, fic, category: het, fandom: criminal minds

Comments 10

gail19 August 11 2010, 21:45:12 UTC

I haven't seen many of the episodes with Elle, and what I have seen didn't really impress me.

Maybe need to rethink a few things.

thanks

l3petitemort August 12 2010, 20:27:33 UTC

Thanks for reading! ♥

poeticpathetic August 11 2010, 22:17:59 UTC

You're my favorite CM fic writer, hands down. You make me like Elle -- a hard task.

l3petitemort August 12 2010, 20:28:47 UTC

Holy cow, thank you... that's quite a compliment *blush* Thanks for taking a chance on Elle, and I'm glad you ended up liking her! ♥ I'm definitely on Team Elle, hahaha

kuriadalmatia August 12 2010, 01:27:42 UTC

Another nice installment in your series. I love how you've had both Elle and Reid change since their last encounter. Her realizing that he was actually watching both entrances was brilliant as was him knowing she was there and ordering the coffee. Elle's reaction was perfect. Thanks so much for adding to this 'verse!

l3petitemort August 12 2010, 20:29:32 UTC

Thank you for reading & taking the time to comment! I'm glad that you enjoyed it... I love them so much ♥

fabrisse August 12 2010, 03:46:31 UTC

Just lovely. I think for geekiness, he fits better with Prentiss ... or Hotch, but for recognition of how fragile humanity is, it's Elle ... or Hotch.

l3petitemort August 12 2010, 20:31:17 UTC

Thank you muchly. That's what I love about these two... their fragility and vulnerability and the various ways they go about concealing it, while it's so obvious the entire time. Yes, they're just lovely together... thank you for reading! ♥

daylyn August 12 2010, 03:46:49 UTC

What a great addition to this series. I loved how much they both changed (and how, in some ways, the didn't). I loved Elle's realizations about Reid. I loved the way he blurted out the things he was thinking (but probably really would never have planned to say). This has a heavy emotional impact. Loved it.

l3petitemort August 12 2010, 20:32:00 UTC

Thank you so much; that's very sweet of you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it ♥