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Nicotine Stains More Than Your Fingertips
( He took one experimental drag as he watched the boy get folded back into the party. He had choked and coughed just from the taste of it but he didn't put it out. He stood there watching the party through the glass as he pretended to smoke the strangers cigarette. )
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you, are one amazing individual...you know that?
THIS, this....this was just, great...i'm tearing up!
Key talking about politics...i don't know why, I just giggled at it...
also this "Everyone there that night was a jock or a jock sympathizer (ie. slut)" XD
""Looks like you need this more than I do." and the strangers voice was like a crackling fire late at night. Deep and warm and he had let out a breathy sort of chuckle as he turned away. It took Taemin a second to process the words and the object that had been left by the boy. Going a bit cross-eyed he had looked down to find a smoldering stub between his lips. The cigarette hung limply as he looked up to watch the stranger head back inside. When the other had turned around inside to pull the door shut he looked up and smiled at Taemin. His heart stopped."
- I really really really liked this like I saw it all in my head and I was like squealing while reading this in the car next to my mom and she looked at me funny and I just giggled. <-- this is what you do ( ... )
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You are just the cutest thing ever!
AND i can't believe you read this in the car! And its not like its smut or anything but its still 2min and boy love and your mom being there makes me giggle!
I love that you got the sad "OH NOOOOO MY FIRST KISS! BAD UMMA!" moment! Really it makes me happy! You have no idea!
Yeah um I really wanted it to work out somehow but sometimes these things have a mind of there own you know. Also it wouldn't have made any real sense and it would have just been too cliche XD
I think I'll end up writing more little one shots along these lines though, maybe it'll end up being a real fic. Who knows.
I really appreciate you reading this and commenting and you saying that your proud of me is way more awesome than I would have guessed. Really....ilu!
I think we both talk alot >.>;;;
Honestly your comment could be any length and they would still make me SUPER HAPPY! Like flail uncontrollably happy!
I'mma stop now.............^^;
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haha, I really don't normally read fics while in close proximity to my parents...mainly because if they saw it I would have to have a long conversation with them and they would probably think i was some kind of wierdo perv...which really doesn't make sense because people read stories all the time, these just happen to include characters based of real life people, and boys being in love, ahh the hypocrisy...BUT I had to, because thats how much I love you.
anyways...I know you have a lot of stuffs going on, school, making icons, having a life...etc. but I'm looking forward to more fics from you because i'm sure they will all turn out amazing and great and yea.
this is sort of an unnecessary response but I just enjoy talking to you so yea.
now i'm done.
oh wait no i'm not...did I say I love you? <--*creeper status achieved*
wow, ok, i'm done for real.
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ilu, hope you see this ^^
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HOLY SHIT!
I'm so excited....I can't.....Omg!
*is dead*
July just said my Key was perfect!
Ok sorry I had to jump around and squeal to the point of pissing off my roomates.
Better now. Maybe. ^^
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING AND COMMENTING AND ALL TOGETHER BEING AMAZING!
If I can come up with a plausible pretense for them to meet back up I will write a sequel. However I just can't come up with anything! ;~;
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- tae could get frustrated and start hunting him down at other parties
- key could spin his magical web of diva knowledge and get them to meet up somehow outside of a party (i.e., key be like "let's go to coffee!' and then ditch taemin and have minho replace him or something)
- tae could take his newfound smoking habit to a cigarette shop and run into minho there
idk just throwing stuff out there for you~~~ ehehehehehee
you're so cute! sldfkjdsfk ♥ you can do it you can do it~
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ilu forever for commenting!
*cuddles*
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(It's still good though)
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Wow, I kinda suck......
BUT I ADDED YOU! *pouts*
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but that was good! BUT Y MINHO NO TURN UP IN TAE'S LIFE FFFFFUUUUUUUU WHR MY 2MIN BE, HAPPY AND COMPLETE AND FLULLY LIKE U )<
/:D?/ i really liked how taemin was just there, smoking his lungs out over his memory on minho and the last bit was pretty much ace for me. and it'd prolly be a cycle that he can't quit until HE MEETS MINHO AND THEY HAVE GOOD SEX Y/Y TELL ME THEY WILL BE
NOW IS THAT GOOD ENOUGH FLAILING I CAN DO BETTER BUT IT'S HOT AND I HAVEN'T EATEN SINCE MORNING D:
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Sufficient flailing indeed!
I kind of want to do a sequel to this. I promise nothing.
But its bouncing around in my head.
So far all I have is the word "sequel" tho ;~;
I just can't come up with a plausible way for them to reconnect without it being cheesy.
irl you never get that kind of second chance.....EVER! *rages*
I'm really SUPER glad you liked it tho. Like SUPER CRAZY WOW! XDDDD
YOU. EAT. NOW! ^^;
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YAY! Woo! God I'm so glad I posted this. I have now had two of the most amazing conversations EVER.....all because of HOMOSEXUAL KPOP FANFICTION!
WHO SAYS MY INTERESTS ARE LAME!? XDDDD
/kanyeshrug? I now know why I have to hip pockets!
One for be_radical and one for you!
this is a reference to that MASSIVE comment thread up there....ignore me and my ridiculousness.
Well it has happened to me maybe once or twice, where I've RANDOMLY run back into somebody years later.......I just wish I could use them as inspiration for the sequal but I don't think they really jive.....curse you life experiences that don't further my deranged kpop obsessions!
I know of that feeling, sometimes even when the kitchen is full I feel like there is NOTHING! Awe I just realized I never ate today either! I think I had a pb&j like 9 hours ago.......and way too much coffee @.@
*jitters*
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