Another Shot.

[kyumin1123]

Pairings: Kyumin(main), Eunhae(if you squint)

Other Characters: Park Eun Hye (OC)

Summary: When Sungmin and Kyuhyun were having a vacation. Then someone ruins it and caused the couple to have a big misunderstanding. What will happen to the couple? Will they just talk about it? Or ignore it the whole time and not talk to each other.

Warnings: boy/boy

Comments

[kyumin1123]

K, thank you very much......it's okay no problem with me....hope you will help me in case i needed help.....:)

[minnie137]

jealous min??
soo cute >.<
hope i can write somethin as good as yours

[kyumin1123]

hi thanks for the comment i appreciate it....:) yeah jealous min....i know you can write better than me...

[jhengchie]

hellowie^^

i read this one and i think that the basic storyline is there^^

some tips:
write deeper: expound on the thoughts and feelings of the characters like

Kyuhyun who can’t resist Sungmin’s pout just nodded as an answer. for the three long years that they've been together, kyuhyun can't find the heart in him to go against that devious yet cute pout of Sungmin, maybe it was the pout that made him fall for him in the first place

I would want to see more details like the setting [describe the beach or how they got there]..

then proof read^^ [although i don't do this]

finally keep on writing until you find your comfort zone^^

[kyumin1123]

thanks very much...i'll remember what you said....what's proof reading?...thanks for the tips...i'll try to write fics hope you could write...

[jhengchie]

^^ proof reading is an act where in you reread your works and look for errors like wrong spelling and grammar. then you revise it if needed. if all is clean and no more errors are found thn you can post your work. this is needed to make your fic easy to understand

[kyumin1123]

ah ok.....thank you very much..i'll try but i'm not sure....

[kyumin1123]

thank you for reading....heheheehe yeah i also love it when sungmin is jealous hehehehe.....i'll try to write more....:)

[kyumin1123]

ok i'll try to write more...i have a fic that is eunhae....i'll try to post it here on my journal....:)