Fic: Miracle in Smallville (Part 4 of 4) by anidawehi & kyrdwyn [Tim/Conner, NC-17 overall]

[kyrdwyn]

Title: Miracle in Smallville (Part 4 of 4)
Authors: anidawehi and kyrdwyn
Pairing: Tim Drake/Conner Kent
Rating: NC-17 (PG-13 in this part)
Genre: AU (non-hero)
Summary: A young businessman who has no time for holidays, or love, finds both when trapped in Smallville, Kansas, with a handsome young farmer.

Authors' Notes: Anidawehi was being subjected to

Comments

[breathesunshine]

Gah! This was really good. Very beautiful.

[sweety8587]

this...i had some trouble holding the tears back at the farewell, i will not lie. i had to turn away from the story for a bit before coming back at it.

Just...christmas and then having to go away and trying to deal. But then gettin back together YAY ;u;

T'was a great fic. A fairly brisk pace but given the time frame I think y'all did a fair job of it all. Usually i get peeved to hell and back at it "Oh for FUCKS sake they just met yesterday and you got em making out? NO NO NO." but never once did i think that here. Y' had the attraction thing written pretty well so it was more of a "well lets see how soon they start snogging" XD

And as far as Christmas fics go, nice and warm and fuzzy for the most parts with some light drama here and there makes it pretty damn good :Db

Great job!

[ladyblkrose]

DARN YOU LJ,here I go again.

Wonderful fic baby, loved the way you tied all the loose ends together in a beautiful Christmas bow. Your version of Tim's reaction to the Kent's presents was so sweet. Your Tim is like a sponge just sopping up the love the Kent's seem to have just laying around by the bucketfulls.
I was so broken hearted (yet hopeful) at the boy's seperation, the goodbye scene in the truck was so bittersweet. BUT I had to laugh when Tim's peeps immediately noted his depression and emotional state. I loved the way you used Tam to point out the obvious and movitate him to make that change (don't we all need a Tam in our lives).
Great Hallmark ending, not too sweet but full of positive emotionans adn kissing!
Thank you for sharing this fic. It was very enjoyable and if you continue to post fic of this caliber I promise to keep reading adn commenting!

[kirax2]

Awwww, cue warm fuzzies! Despite (and maybe partly because of) the deliberate cliches, this gave me real pleasure to read. You can never tell how what you write will affect someone else, so I want to say that this story really cheered me up at a time when I needed it, helped me smile when I didn't feel like it, and generally made my holidays better. Thank you both for writing and sharing it. :)

[saphire_dance]

This was so cute and sweet and sappy without being as overly cloying as these xmas movies usually are. You did a wonderful job