Fic: Miracle in Smallville (Part 2 of 4) by anidawehi & kyrdwyn [Tim/Conner, NC-17 overall]

[kyrdwyn]

Title: Miracle in Smallville (Part 2 of 4)
Authors: anidawehi and kyrdwyn
Pairing: Tim Drake/Conner Kent
Rating: NC-17 (PG-13 in this part, but we're thinking overall will be higher)
Genre: AU (non-hero)
Summary: A young businessman who has no time for holidays, or love, finds both when trapped in Smallville, Kansas, with a handsome young farmer.

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Comments

[ladyblkrose]

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I loved this so much. You so captured not only the voice but the spirit of Connor and Tim! And I too am so glad that you took that old and tired trope of the misunderstood conversation and tossed it on it's ear! Your having Tim come out and clear up the little mis-spoken word quick fast and in a hurry was perfect. And that first kiss, so sweet and full of potential. The boy's snow play was skillfully crafted with it not being to heavy handed with the poor city boy not knowing how to handle the snow and getting all damp and frostbitten schtick. The snow snuggling was sweet made even sweeter finding out that Ma was not only watching but approving.
Now Ms. Martha, going behind Tim's back and talking with Bernard was hysterical and sweet and slightly snarky in her own loving way. Your Benard just fell in line with the Martha and his loyalty and respect for his boss just shone through. I can't wait to see what to see what you have up your sleeve next with these two. AND if this is what happens when you watch too much Hallmark, I wonder what would happen if you started to watch too much SyFy network. Oh the camp and crack that could happen then LOL.
Thank you for sharing and again I'm so looking forward to NEXT 8D

[kyrdwyn]

So glad you're enjoying this!

We had to clear up that conversation quickly, otherwise it would have taken too long to get to the good stuff (kissing!) and just, to me, bogged down the story.

Personally, while Tim may be a 'city boy', I think he'd still have had experience enough in snow to know how to avoid becoming damp and frostbitten (I'm sure there are some interesting ski lift stories in his past, not to mention any trips to cold climes on business).

Ma totally approves of Tim and Conner. Bernard isn't so sure of Conner yet (he hasn't met him after all) but he does approve of Ma based on that phone conversation. And I'm pretty sure he'll be more than willing to scheme more for the boys in the future.

Oh man, if we did a Syfy cliche'....I'd probably have to insist on throwing Damian in there so he could be eaten at the halfway mark by whatever fantastical beast they were all facing (what? Everyone tends to die in those except the love interests! *innocent grin*)