[fic] Claim; Part III
AN: Hmm, okay, I'm hoping that I didn't rush anything. Though I'm sure some of you are thinking 'wtf do you mean 'rush'?! It's freaking nine thousand plus words long!!' but I needed to get everyone's side of the story. Well, except for Tamaki 'cause I fail at writing in his POV. I'm also hoping that I didn't make any of them OOC. *worries* And on top of that, I'm also hoping that I tied up all loose ends.
So in other words (haha), tell me what you think! Are there questions that are still hanging in the air? Did I screw up on their characterizations? Was I too insightful? Any constructive criticism is welcomed. ^^
I actually had this awesome scene planned out to coincide with the title but I cut it out. Which actually kind of made me sad. Mmm, maybe I'll make it another omake thing for this. XD Or I'll just turn it into a one-shot that has nothing to do with this series. Haha, we'll see.
I've also noticed, funnily enough, that I have no idea in what time frame this occurs in, in either the manga or the anime. *facepalms* That was poor planning on my part, my apologies. The third part at least obviously has to be after the Karuizawa incident. So it's safe to say that Kyouya and Kaoru were already sleeping with each other then but I don't know when all this actually happens. I hope everyone overlooks that error just this once. 'Kayz? *sweats*
Another thing that I'm dreadfully curious about: did anyone out there already know what 'asphyxiation' meant before reading this/looking it up? XD I know, random question but hey.
In any case, Happy Birthday again to Ootori Kyouya. You get a Kaoru for a present. 8D
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