FIC: Into the Indefinite Sky : CH 15 (Yuuram, AU)

[sp_kathrine]

Okay this is later than I had planned it to be, but it the second to last completed chapter and I'm still working out the kinks in CH16. This is also the last BETAED chapter, because nekokatechan can't be on the net right now so I'm going solo. I'm also being VERY careful because of it

Comments

[jc4mi]

Great as always! I can't wait to find out what happens to the baby...Don't leave me hanging! T_T

[sp_kathrine]

I won't leave you hanging...for too long. *evil grin*

[lenainverse]

Great chapter! I love character development, for me that's what really makes this fic great. I like how Wolf's thoughts about the baby are changing from "you're a parasite" to "it'll be better for you if you don't have to suffer." Very nice.

Does this comm have any fanfic awards? Because this fic should win something!

[sp_kathrine]

You know, after a stressful day when I barely had the time to post this update, seeing compliments this makes me *blush* and smile uncontrollably. Thanks.

[melodi_chan]

Poor Yuuri.

*hugs him*

Wolf's giving him such a hard time. XD

Nice chapter. ;D

[sp_kathrine]

Yeah, but I tried to write Wolf as if he was frm the other side of the sprectrum.

He doesn't want Yuuri to behave like a king out of the sake of decorum or such, but because he knows that bad/weak kings lead to ruined countries and suffering people. And because of his jump around life as a slave, he's lived under the rule of many different kings and in many different kingdoms.

And where would KKM be if Wolf didn't give Yuuri a hard time? I'm glad you liked it, still! ^_^

[mistress_may]

yay, another chapter! I can't wait for more, its soo interesting to read.

[minstara]

I love this! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up.