Always or Never (P, 1)

[bibbity]

Title: Always or Never (Prologue and Chapter One)
Rating: Eventual NC-17
Pairing(s): YuuRam, some hints at ConYuu, not seen OMC/Wolfram
Summary: The best-laid plans of mice and men often go awry.

A/N: The majority of the spellings and phrases I've taken from the AonE dub. I tried to be consistent more than accurate, but if there's a horrendous

Comments

[bibbity]

and Wolfram could feel it sinking threw his own uniform
Did you mean "sinking through"?

:O! I don't know what you're talking about, crazy lady, it looks fine to me.. ^^;

Hn? I always believed the extra e was for the person who was purposed to . . . *looks it up* Curses. I am very wrong. *Fixes*

Hee! Thank you for the canon comment, I was trying really hard for that feeling. ^__^

[prongsy]

No, Maaya1x2 were right (unless, of course, you two are being sarcastic... sarcasm is rather hard to tell online)...

Anyway, you put "threw" as in past tense of the verb "to throw", which is what Yuuri does with a baseball. And Maaya1x2 is right in that it should be "through" as in the preposition. It was sinking "through" somehing. You can't sink "threw"... unless somehow something sinks through the trajectory of a throw... no, still "through".... gah headache! o.O

*retreats back to grammar nazi land*

[prongsy]

Oh the irony! *smacks face* After posting a comment on grammar, I realize a second too late that when I changed "you" to "Maaya1x2" in the first sentence, I neglected t change the form of "to be"... so Maaya1x2 was right...

Done! ^_^

I am such a dork. -_-

[bibbity]

Ah, I was joking but I forgot you guys can't hear my tone. ^^;;; I actually remember typing that sentence while talking on the phone with someone. Jokingly, I said, "Which threw/ough do you like?" And she say "T-h-r-e-w," Without thinking, I typed what she said and kept going. I forgot to fix it. x_x;;;

[bibbity]

Yessss. *Rubs hands evilly* That was it. You were tired. >.>;;;