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Sep 28, 2006 06:23

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author - lenainverse, wolfram x yuuri, fanfiction: 2006

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surealistic_des September 28 2006, 11:12:14 UTC
ah this was an interesting read....

although it got confusing as I was unsure if you changed viewpoints bwtween Yuuri and Wolfram.. or maybe its just me ^^;;

but I'm looking forward to the next one XDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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lenainverse September 28 2006, 12:23:43 UTC
Thanks for commenting. ^_^

Can I ask where you were confused? The viewpoints weren't changing, but this is a very detached style and so I can see how confusion could happen. This is a very atypical writing style for me and I want to refine it, so if you could let me know it would be great (although I'm not sure if I'll ever use it again...). Thanks!

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surealistic_des September 29 2006, 15:41:19 UTC
yay for first comment <333

*sobers* anyways

Ah I see. I see. well maybe its no point in telling as I didn't realise the style of writing you were doing. So I'm apologise ^^;;

No, its okay. your style is interesting to say the least and something I haven't seen for awhile <333

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lenainverse September 29 2006, 17:18:24 UTC
No need to apologize...I honestly like the contructive criticism, because it helps me to do better next time.

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hineko_eloriel September 28 2006, 12:59:01 UTC
This didn't confuse me one bit, I thought that it was very clear. I loved this - it is perfect. You made this seem so believable and I really love this writing style. It was a very captivating ficlet and I just couldn't stop reading. Well done.

I'm looking forward to the "sequel". ^_~

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lenainverse September 28 2006, 21:05:12 UTC
Thanks! ^_^ It's always nice when someone describes your writing as "captivating." I appreciate your comments!

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melodi_chan September 28 2006, 15:53:10 UTC
8D

That was so cute and sexy. XDDDD

Nicely done. ^^

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lenainverse September 28 2006, 21:05:38 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it. ^_^

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thursdaystgiles September 28 2006, 16:56:45 UTC
yummy. Good Yuri/Wolf is hard to find. Can't wait for the sequel

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lenainverse September 28 2006, 21:07:56 UTC
Thanks! Sequel is in the works...after I finish a few more things. ^_^

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bard_of_death September 28 2006, 18:00:38 UTC
awww i really liked that. Not only was it well written, but you managed to show the slow build-up to Yuuri's finally revelation in a way that didn't seemed rushed, which is what I like to see. Also, most "yuuri thinks he's attracted to Wolfram" fics have a lot of Yuuri just denying his feelings instead of actually considering them. To say the least, i loved it lol

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lenainverse September 28 2006, 21:10:56 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad to see you considered it slow progress - because of the style, it's more a series of vignettes than a whole fic, and it could be interpreted as very rapid-fire or very slow. I was going for slow, and I'm happy if that worked.

There is some element of denial here, but I always thought Yuri's problem is more that he just needs to redefine his idea of "love." And that was what I wanted to do here.

Thanks for the comments! ^_^

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