Can I ask where you were confused? The viewpoints weren't changing, but this is a very detached style and so I can see how confusion could happen. This is a very atypical writing style for me and I want to refine it, so if you could let me know it would be great (although I'm not sure if I'll ever use it again...). Thanks!
This didn't confuse me one bit, I thought that it was very clear. I loved this - it is perfect. You made this seem so believable and I really love this writing style. It was a very captivating ficlet and I just couldn't stop reading. Well done.
awww i really liked that. Not only was it well written, but you managed to show the slow build-up to Yuuri's finally revelation in a way that didn't seemed rushed, which is what I like to see. Also, most "yuuri thinks he's attracted to Wolfram" fics have a lot of Yuuri just denying his feelings instead of actually considering them. To say the least, i loved it lol
Thank you!! I'm glad to see you considered it slow progress - because of the style, it's more a series of vignettes than a whole fic, and it could be interpreted as very rapid-fire or very slow. I was going for slow, and I'm happy if that worked.
There is some element of denial here, but I always thought Yuri's problem is more that he just needs to redefine his idea of "love." And that was what I wanted to do here.
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although it got confusing as I was unsure if you changed viewpoints bwtween Yuuri and Wolfram.. or maybe its just me ^^;;
but I'm looking forward to the next one XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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Can I ask where you were confused? The viewpoints weren't changing, but this is a very detached style and so I can see how confusion could happen. This is a very atypical writing style for me and I want to refine it, so if you could let me know it would be great (although I'm not sure if I'll ever use it again...). Thanks!
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*sobers* anyways
Ah I see. I see. well maybe its no point in telling as I didn't realise the style of writing you were doing. So I'm apologise ^^;;
No, its okay. your style is interesting to say the least and something I haven't seen for awhile <333
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I'm looking forward to the "sequel". ^_~
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That was so cute and sexy. XDDDD
Nicely done. ^^
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There is some element of denial here, but I always thought Yuri's problem is more that he just needs to redefine his idea of "love." And that was what I wanted to do here.
Thanks for the comments! ^_^
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