Dec 03, 2006 00:51
Here is a haiku I wrote just now. Tell me what you think! =^_^= I love writing haikus, because you don't have to rhyme unless you want to. When I write any other kind, I feel so pressured to rhyme and then I can't find the right words and it's annoying. Anyway, please read this and comment on it!
My forbidden love,
why did you have to leave me?
I have been waiting.
Ev'ryday, I see
you. In the morning you're there.
My cup of coffee.
We put on a mask.
We hide how we truly feel.
If only I could.
My forbidden love.
love,
poem,
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