SGA Fic: Prodigy (a wee!John fic)

[kyizi]

Prodigy
By Kyizi

Disclaimer: Stargate: Atlantis and all related items do not belong to me, only the stories and their related original ideas and characters are mine. No copyright infringement intended.
Rating: PG
Characters: Five-year-old John, Rodney, mentions of others.
Spoilers: Season Three.
Feedback: Is a gift. It’s nice to give :)

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Comments

[artemis_prime]

Oh, happy and sad sigh... Rodney's going to "fix" John, but that means losing weeJohn. Oh, Rodney, I feel for you.

This was perhaps one of your best emotional pieces in this 'verse. It tugged at the heart without being sappy. Seeing Rodney sitting on the floor, crying over the loss of weeJohn, was quite moving. Is he mourning that he can't be as close to John as an adult as he could with John a child? Is he worried that once John is an adult again that he won't be able to express his love for John? And yes, after re-reading your other weeJohn fics, I get the distinct impression that this is a McShep story.

Regardless, I very much enjoyed this. As for what I'd like to see in snippets or the final...hmmm, have to get back to you on that. Maybe an Atlantis PoV as she watches Rodney slowly figure out how to return John to normal?

You know I can't hardly wait for the big fic, so get busy! :)

[kyizi]

Thank you so much for this review! It broke my heart ending the snippets for now, but I felt that this was the best way to do it. Looks like wee!John was top of the requests for updates, so it's very likely that'll be worked on with a vengeance as soon as I finish the prompt fic I have a deadline for.

Sorry about the delay getting back to you and thanks again!

[kyizi]

Oh, thank you! I'm very glad you liked it and, yeah, I had to give Rodney time to say goodbye!

[smileleigh]

Oh man, I wanted to rush in and give them both a hug too. You brought tears to my eyes again with this story.

I don't know about the rest but right now I'm feeling a bit like Rodney right now knowing that weeJohn is going away. When you find a great storyline and you know it is going to end in a bit... *sniff* Man I really need a hug.

I love your writings!

[kyizi]

My Rodney muse gratefully accepts your hugs and gives one back :) I'm so very glad you liked it. Sorry about the delay responding and thanks again for the great feedback.

[syble4]

You made me cry. :(

Yey for Rodney fixing the machine but 'sniffle' not so yey for losing our weejohn. Of course that does not stop me from wanting to know what John thinks 'after' he's returned to his adult form. So, I guess that's a request for a snipet or a scene or something. :)

[kyizi]

Oh, I'm sorry! *hugs*

Yeah, I wanna keep wee!John. I'm tempted to find a cloning machine before Rodney turns him back...*looks around shiftily and wonders if anyone will mind* ;p

*takes note of request*

Thanks for the feedback!

[loriel_eris]

The end was good, but it was the start that had me bawling like a baby. Mostly John's awareness that he's wrong somehow, that his friends are sad because he's wrong, that his friends are sad. And god, you mentioned Carson.

And I love that he's learning Japanese.

However, three. Years? God, I still hate you so much.

[But sentient!Atlantis!!!!!]

You so made me cry. *sobs*

[kyizi]

Yeah, mentioning Carson kills me every time, too! And wee!John is too smart not to notice that everyone wishes he was something else, despite how they feel abut him.

Hee, I love that, too! There's just something about John asking Miko to teach him Japanese, whether he's wee or not, that I adore!

*hides*

[I love sentient!Atlantis!]

*smoooooooch* and *hugs*