Fic: Paternal Instinct (a wee!John fic)

Jul 17, 2008 11:49

I should be working, you know...

Paternal Instinct
By Kyizi

Disclaimer: Stargate: Atlantis and all related items do not belong to me, only the stories and their related original ideas and characters are mine. No copyright infringement intended.
Rating: PG
Characters: Lorne, four-year-old John, mentions of Rodney
Spoilers: None, but it’s sort of ( Read more... )

sga, wee!john, fic

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artemis_prime July 17 2008, 13:53:05 UTC
Yah, new weeJohn! It was interesting to see Lorne's perspective on this. Reminded me of Christmas with the Millers when Rodney confessed his fear of losing John. I liked that it was Lorne who helped John believe that Rodney would never let anything bad happen to him, thus, Lorne is like an uncle to Rodney's dad.

I'd love to see a vignette of how John actually became three years old and the first reactions of people at their "new" CO. Of course, I'd love to see more weeJohn anything. :)

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kyizi July 17 2008, 13:56:37 UTC
Hee, you're awesome! Thanks, I'm so glad you liked this. Also, I'm glad you get it, because the relationship between John and Lorne is actually one of my favourite parts of this universe. Rodney thinks Lorne thinks he's an awful father figure, but Lorne's actually in awe of how well ROdney handles it and doesn't think that ROdney cares what he thinks. Oh, boys! ;)

I'd love to see a vignette of how John actually became three years old and the first reactions of people at their "new" CO. Of course, I'd love to see more weeJohn anything. :)

I'm almost tempted to give you a preview of the main fic, because that's where you'll find out how and see it happen and how people react... ;)

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artemis_prime July 18 2008, 03:58:26 UTC
I am tempted to want to read a snippet, but I am more tempted to read the whole thing. So nudge, nudge. Get a move on and finish the story ;) Please! Gotta know how it started and how it's gonna end.

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kyizi July 18 2008, 08:09:06 UTC
LoL! I can take a hint! ;) I've got my laptop back and he's all fixed. I'll make the main fic one of my main priorities after I get everything back up and running (don't you hate having to reinstall everything after getting computers back at their factory settings?)

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thdancingferret July 20 2008, 21:40:22 UTC
I'm almost tempted to give you a preview of the main fic, because that's where you'll find out how and see it happen and how people react... ;)

OMG, is there anything *I* can do to tempt you into giving *me* a preview??? *bats lashes, tries to look adorable, fidgets in seat* *g*

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kyizi July 22 2008, 16:06:05 UTC
But of course ;) This isn't the very start and it's only some of it.

* * *

If Rodney McKay had realised that this was a defining moment in the upcoming three years of his life, he might have taken a moment to pay a little more attention to what the idiotic locals were telling him. Instead he rants, he raves and he generally insults every village elder, every deity they’ve ever known, the kids who’re likely grow up to be village elders and everyone else in between. He even throws in the goat-like creatures they passed on the way into the village, just for good measure.

It’s only when he, Ronon and Teyla are being dropped off at the ‘Gate with a screaming child that Rodney thinks he might have missed something along the way.

* * *

“What do you mean this is Colonel Sheppard ( ... )

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loriel_eris July 23 2008, 18:58:35 UTC
I THINK I HATE YOU!!!!!!! THREE YEARS?!!! YOU ARE KILLING ME! KILLING ME, Y'HEAR!

Also?

And, oh god, this is Sheppard and he has no idea who Rodney is.

omg cries!

Also, also?

"Why can’t we just go back with bigger guns?" Ronon asks and, for once, Rodney’s in complete agreement with the man.

OMG yes please!

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kyizi July 24 2008, 08:10:51 UTC
I THINK I HATE YOU!!!!!!! THREE YEARS?!!! YOU ARE KILLING ME! KILLING ME, Y'HEAR!

*snort* Somehow, I had the feeling you'd pick up on that bit!

And, oh god, this is Sheppard and he has no idea who Rodney is.

omg cries!

*sniff* Yeah, sorry...

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loriel_eris September 14 2008, 18:01:50 UTC
*still hates you*

Also. Write more. ;p

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thdancingferret July 24 2008, 02:34:23 UTC
“Um…hello…little boy.”

“John,” the boy says slowly, pointing to himself and treating Rodney like a brain damaged ferret. “What’s you’ name?”

And, oh god, this is Sheppard and he has no idea who Rodney is.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!! OMG, so freakin' adorable!! Oh more, more, more, pweeeeeeeeeeease??? ;)

*runs off to feverishly read new installment*

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kyizi July 24 2008, 08:11:51 UTC
I know, eh, poor Rodney!

Also, your icon? *is gleeful* Awesome!

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thdancingferret July 26 2008, 16:09:50 UTC
Heheh, he is *so* wrapped around wee!John's tiny little fingers... ;)

I absolutely adore my wee!John icons - if tardis80 ever offers to create art or icons for requests, I am *so* going to be begging for more wee!John... because, really, the world would be a much better place with more wee!John... *wink wink nudge nudge* *g*

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