Comments | kusumiaiyuu: Only You ～きみだけ～ Chapter 2

kusumiaiyuu

Only You ～きみだけ～ Chapter 2

Aug 16, 2010 21:33

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Dictionary:

jan-ken-pon - scissors, paper, stone
Itadakimasu - Thanks for the food

Comments 5

yukitsubute April 8 2011, 10:34:41 UTC

Oh, poor jin...he is really worried, and somehow angry about taking care for the girl...I am really curious about the next chapter :)

Thanks *hugs*

kusumiaiyuu April 8 2011, 10:49:18 UTC

haha glad to hear that. :D Thank you! *hugs* ^^

msdesireen May 30 2011, 16:28:54 UTC

Maybe it's just me who likes to read realistic stuffs.

-You cannot reach Tokyo city by taxi from Narita in 20 min by cab.
-Kanagawa is also located in the kanto region but that doesn't mean you can reach Kanagawa by crossing a road from a cheap motel in Tokyo.
-You certainly don't just cut open someone's brain to check if there's internal bleeding.
-Impact of accident or Coma are most probably not the direct cause of amnesia.

I like OC fics and for a moment I thought it would be a quality fic translated from native language to English. Guess I was wrong.

Fics with predictable plot can still do very well if the language and details are good.

Good try though.

& who am I to comment on others when I couldn't finish a proper story myself. sigh...

Thanks for sharing.

msdesireen May 30 2011, 16:32:45 UTC

One more thing to add, why is it that Akanishi almost always has an attitude problem?

Having a Bad-boy image does not mean one has terrible attitude problem not?

Jin is punctual and seldom late. He is not the most polite man you see on TV compared to other idols but he certainly does not come across as terrible rude. Or do girls these days love Guys who had attitude problems?

kusumiaiyuu June 3 2011, 13:07:24 UTC

haha thanks for the honest opinion. :) But I've checked online for the causes of amnesia and they did say that impact from accident can cause it. lol SORRY! I've never been to Japan myself so I tried to use my imagination(which I think it doesn't work since you've said that ;)) to picture everything. yea...
I write this fanfic out of my own imagination and it is a work of fiction and there's nothing more to that. :) Thanks again for taking time to comment and read.