Blessed: Chapter 2

Aug 19, 2015 04:27

Title: Blessed
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fic: blessed, pair: akanishi/kamenashi, year: 2015

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sakuravocal August 19 2015, 15:45:56 UTC
First!

This fic is getting really interesting! I love how desperate Jin is getting to chase Kazuya out. Bakanishi's so childish XD

I have a feeling Jin will lose the bet. His attention is completely focused on Kazuya until he forgets his own daughter. Seriously, bad Jin! :/

Please update! I really wanna know what big secret is Kazuya keeping. Though I might have a hunch...

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patrycja444d August 19 2015, 16:20:09 UTC
Thank you :) I'm glad you like it.

Jin's just wants to protect his little daughter. Unfortunately, like you said, he's too childish to do it right XD

Haha, I think that Kame's secret is a rather obvious but I will gladly listen to your theory ;3

PS. I've added you so have fun reading. :)

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kathartickat August 19 2015, 16:42:07 UTC
I'll be back to review!!!! I didn't even know you have posted chapter 1 already. O_O

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patrycja444d August 19 2015, 16:45:16 UTC
Don't worry, it happens ;) I'm happy to see you again :3

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kathartickat August 19 2015, 17:21:47 UTC
I'm back!!!!

Okay. I have mentioned this before. I am Kame-biased. But the way writers write Jin make me love him more in fics most of the time. But you have managed to make me feel annoyed at Jin. Darn. He's such a brat. I wish he wins, actually, and then after winning, Kame leaves, and then he'll realize it's actually a hard task. His adrenaline will of course wane down after Kame leaves so---

Poor Theia. She also suffers quite a bit because of her more childish father.

I was actually cheering for Kame at the sidelines. I was like: Go Kame, give it to that aho! And that rarely happens. Because contrary to my love (love-hate) for him in real life, I actually love really hating him in fics.

UPDATE PLEASE?

P.S. I'm sorry. I'm a bit busy so I just showed myself today. My book's out and am doing promotions. -__- Hey, remember that last PM you sent me? You're going to ask me something? If you want, you can PM me now. :) Nice to see you again too!

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patrycja444d August 19 2015, 18:00:29 UTC
Thank you and I hope it's okay I'm proud of making you feel that way, hehehe. ^^

Sorry, even if I find your version very tempting at the moment I don't think I can do it. I've already have a plot for some chapters and I was actually shocked that the fic most probably will have more than 20 chapters (which actually made me want to hit my head on the desk XD). I have only 9 chapters planned so far but I can already tell it's not even half of the whole story.

I will update as soon as I can but no promises; my inspiration kind of sleeps all the time. XDD

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naoki_hikari August 19 2015, 17:18:20 UTC
Haha! Kame prevails!!! Serves Jin right to make Theia so sad even though he loves his mother so much!

I hope Theia made it hard for Jin so he can see how useless he is in taking care of Theia other than being a doting father cause Really Jin? Playing with Theia's feelings is too much!! :(

Thank you~

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patrycja444d August 19 2015, 20:34:41 UTC
We will see but I like making Jin pay for his mistakes so I think it won't be an easy bet to win ;3

Thank you for reading and commenting!

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meeii August 19 2015, 17:47:42 UTC
An update!! Yattaa ~~~

I really liked this chapter, Akanishi just proved himself to be the biggest child ever xD what with those baka pranks!!! Hhhhhhh it was really funny

It seems like the story will take a new turn! I am looking forwrad to the next chapter :D

Otsukare sama deshita 👍

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patrycja444d August 19 2015, 17:54:21 UTC
Thanks! :)

I'm happy you found the pranks funny since it was pretty hard to think of them XDD

Well, certainly a few things need to change so I can move to the part of the fic that was my main idea from the beginning ;3

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anthonny August 19 2015, 21:07:04 UTC
thank you

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patrycja444d August 19 2015, 21:18:26 UTC
Thank you for reading.

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