Fic: Drowning

[alliterationhor]

Title: Drowning
Author: alliterationhor
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Spoilers: not a one.
Rating: PG
Author's note: this is sort of the raw form (meaning, it's not completely done yet; it needs some work).
EDIT 10/09/2006: updated to finished version!
Visuals: the front of the ship, a lotta water.
Comments/concrit appreciated.

Comments

[duchessa]

'end note: I wanted to write porn, they wanted to talk about death. Silly boys.'

After all the somberness, that line cracked me up. XD
I really ike this, and it makes sense that Kurogane and Fai having very different philosophies about life. Its kind of tragic though, that Fai just wants to 'stop' existing and not even dream of heaven. At least thats how I read it.

Lovely fic.

[snarky_kat]

That was lovely. Kurogane does trust Fai, enough to allow him to watch his back and protect his blind side. Silly boys indeed.

[gacktyougirl]

“With my life. I know you would give your life to save any one of us. I know I can trust you. And I know you don’t trust me.”

Poor Kurorin... *hugs him* It's a very interesting fic. Makes you think a bit, which is always nice.

Mm, is there any chance of a sequel?

[alliterationhor]

yay! I like making people think. : )

this is actually part of the What You Wish For-verse, so it's ... kind of a prequel? there's a whole buncha flashbacks and some post-Wish-verse stuff that doesn't fit into the 12 chapters, so they're gonna be omake chapters.

[spiffy_teacup]

That was very deep. Yeah, I think that that's a very Fay-ish thing to say, about the just stopping part. It was very cute.

The end line, of course, had me giggling profusely. Sheesh, they have their priorities all wrong!

[sozuki17]

This was great! <3 And your ending comment was hilarious! XD I see all the hints you made with the story Fai told Kurogane. >3