What You Wish For (Chapter 9)

[alliterationhor]

Title: What You Wish For
Author: alliterationhor
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Spoilers: Yama Yama Yama. a bit of Kurogane's backstory.
Rating: R-ish?
Status: 9/12 chapters.
Author's note: fluff. fluffity fluff-tastic fluff.
Another note: this chapter is hella long.
Also note: for easy reference, the tattoo.
Fanfic archive hereComments/concrit

Comments

[annako]

Ive been following this story along for a while now, might as well drop a comment. X3

And half of that family was dimensions away, and daddy did not remember him. <--- my favorite line ;_;

And *small because i feel stupid for asking* “That would be my point.” Fai grinned. “What am I doing to do with you?”

Uhmm.. @_@ I'm so stupid that i screwed over that sentence for like a min before figuring it was a typo? Or am i really stupid and it isnt? Sorry @__@

Its really nice =3 and I hope you have fun on your vacation XD

[alliterationhor]

that's a typo! *facepalm* wow, that's funny. I've read this thing so many times and I didn't catch that! noooooooo, thank you thank you thank you! for letting me know. : )

and your icon is adorable. and fascinating. I might stare at it forever.

[annako]

No problem! I'm glad I'm of use XD This is an awesome fanfic, I should've commented sooner. =( besides, im a genius at typoing (in fact, the key i press the most often is the backspace key, no joke).

Thanks XDD IT SWIGGLES =D Thats not the original tho, the original is here , but it was too big to use as an icon. =(

[alliterationhor]

yay! thank you! ohh, believe me, I do my share of backspacing. : p

I think if I stare at that icon long enough, it might actually do something R-rated. *concentrates*

[alliterationhor]

and the next one's a cliffhanger... and the next one's a cliffhanger... : D

[elenatha]

I have as well followed this storyline for 2 weeks now. Since I just got myself a LJ page, I thought I should let you know how much I loved this fic.
I can't wait for next chapter. I dare say that I wait for every chapter as much as I wait for the new Tsubasa weekly chappie XD (And that's really saying a lot!)
Also- you inspired me to draw a pic- I haven't finished it, but if you want to see my work, go here: http://elenatha.livejournal.com/
Scroll down and you'll see two of my most recent TRC pictures xD

To end the rambling- I read on a previous chapter(s) taht you wnated a pic made of Kuro with Fye before tehir first night together (love!) I'm thinking about drawing taht for you XD

Keep up the amazing work!

[alliterationhor]

wow, that is an amazing compliment! thank you!

eeeeeeeeeeeee! oh, your stuff is gorgeous! the Fai! and the Kuro! and Fai's hands! and Kuro's hands! and Kuro's hair! and Fai's hair! and Fai's eyes! and the black and the white and the hand and Kuro's eyes! and your Mokona is even cuter than he is in the manga! is Kuro-puppy glaring at Ashura? cuz he's all possessive and I love it!

*insert shameless begging and puppy-dog eyes here*

[elenatha]

You're very welcome- and thank you for the compliment as well.
I try my best. Sure, I'll draw you some Kuro x Fye as soon as I get time off from college and work ;D
But you have to promise me to keep up the fanfic! *flails* I just adore it!

He could be glaring at Ashura! That's why he's reaching to embrace Fye~

[alliterationhor]

Yay!!! *dances* pretty pretty KuroFai! no worries, I shall be patient. good things are worth waiting for! ♥

there's more fanfic, I promise. at the current moment there's 18,700 words more to the Wish-verse than fits in these 12 chapters.

and Fai's all smug with Kuro's arms around him like, "ha ha, I've got a pretty ninja!"

[erenriel]

You may resume the ravishment.

I just about died when Fai said that! XDDD I like this chapter. I adore how much the two of them have both grown and changed for the better over the course of this fic.

[alliterationhor]

yay! it makes me happy when silly lil bits like that make people laugh. I love that line. : )

[alliterationhor]

lol, I was like, 10? is there an extra one somewhere, did I miss it?

eek, I'm mean, sorry. but while I'm gone I'm sure I'll be writing, so hopefully I can have a small something or other to post maybe Thrusday, after I get back. : )

am happy you're enjoying it!