Drabble - Fallen Comrade

[zelinxia]

Title: Fallen Comrade
Rating: M
Spoilers: Outo (Volume 7); reference to Kurogane's past (Volume 13)
Word Count: 100
Author's Note: I feel that Outo Arc confirms the family dynamic and the various relationships. I'll be working on more drabbles set in that arc then.

Recently edited for clarification.

Comments

[beeskies]

the image of fai mauled by demons truly is shiver-inducing, and i think you captured that and kurogane's reaction very, very well. this is very well written, short, simple, but provoking. i love it! <3

[zelinxia]

Thank you. ^^

Ah, the image of an arm being devoured was a reference to Kurogane's past and not necessarily a grueling "what-if" image of what could have happened to Fai. That was partially a confusion on my part. *goes to make minor edit*

[beeskies]

you're very welcome! (:
and, ah, yes. that does make sense. either way, it still is really touching. c:

[yaoixalchemist]

you=amazing writing <3