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sweetjerry in kuroxfai

/HAS INTERNETS AGAIN SCREAM

May 02, 2011 18:34

Story: Black cat, white mage - Part 7
Pairings: Kurogane/Fai, Sakura/Syaoran, Yukito/Touya, the usual suspects.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: More swearing, rape is mentioned, MORE GRATUITOUS ALCOHOL CONSUMPTION
Summary: A lost princess. A mage running away from his past. A crippled warrior doing his best to forget the man he used to be. And a young man ( Read more... )

fanfic - pg13, fanfic

Comments 6

maijame May 2 2011, 22:26:48 UTC

Oh my... oh my... you're pulling on my heartstrings big time with the Kuro-parents. I'm a big fan of them .. also of his father's retainer, whose name was never mentioned.

Lot's of explanations, that don't really explain what we REALLY want to know and mostly just uncover new questions, but for now, I'm just stuck on the last part about epic love story tragedies, because once upon a blue moon, I was actually trying to write something like that for them... just didn't work, because I couldn't find good names and shied away from killing them off for too long...

...beautiful chapter, I'm glad I noticed before going to bed! Lot's of nice possibilities for dreams. ^__^

sweetjerry May 3 2011, 22:24:13 UTC

Yes! I totally fangirled that retainer like crazy! He was like... the epitome of awesome.

Ah, I'm far too fond of epic love tragedies. But I really hate killing characters, so I feel your pain ^^

Yay! If I bring nice dreams, that totally makes my day :D /hugs

fieldofclover May 3 2011, 00:17:43 UTC

/screams

/keysmashes

/screams and keysmashes

My brain looks like this at the moment: aghskdvcbfngagndgatsljdsjhgfxw75egxxjnzkjxgfw7^$UXvdsk!

KURO-PARENTS aieeeeeeee *_*

If I could love you anymore for mentioning them, I would and I do <3 <3 <3

And oh dear. Oh dear oh dear oh dear. Syaoran, you poor boy, what demon sleeps inside your skin? And the thought of blue eyes for the little puppy chills me to the bone...

...and Fai is a lot more powerful than he is letting on, with a past he desperately wants to keep hidden and I love that not only is Kuro-cookie is seeing straight through him (his lies, his dodging and the shields he so carefully constructs), but dear little kitty is as well.

And on the subject of little kitty: WINGS OF FATE

/screams a little more

And a smiling, happy Kuro-peach is a charming Kuro-peach, and Fai is definitely feeling the tugging on those heartstrings... <3

/screams with joy at new chapter

(And Watanuki, saved by Doumeki, as always, forever and ever amen <3)

sweetjerry May 3 2011, 22:30:30 UTC

Awesome! Because there will be more mentionings in the next chapter and so clearly I will get more love! /hoards all the love/ Also, there will be all the fucking fanservice. Because I feel like it.

That curse thing is pretty fucking terrifying. Well, I think so. But I'm an utter wuss xD AND THE WINGS OF FATE SORT OF SCARE ME AS WELL SOB LMAO

Fai is inevitably fated to be looked through by everything when he tries to be emo and hide-y. Just like Watanuki is inevitably fated to be dashingly saved by Doumeki. Forever and always. Yep xD

/cuddles you close forever and feeds you smiling, happy Kuro-peaches

fieldofclover May 4 2011, 00:07:38 UTC

I love you. Just putting that out there.

(Kuro-parents, Kuro-parents, I love them so hard, and that they will possibly get more screentime makes me go ajasdfghjkl in anticipation!)

I love how you're writing something that scares yourself. That is only a good sign XD (PSST IT KINDA SCARES ME TOO LOLOL MAYBE WE CAN HUNKER DOWN TOGETHER BEHIND THE COUCH??)

It is Watanuki's DESTINY to be saved by a dashingly daring Doumeki <3

/yaaaaaaay~~~! <3

fieldofclover May 4 2011, 00:08:46 UTC

ALSO FANSERVICE.

FAISERVICE. KUROSERVICE. FANSERVICE.

/hearts forever and unfs in anticipation