Kuro-Fay Love In Just 15 Words

[seeliespright]

Title: Kuro-Fay Love In Just 15 Words (a combined effort of the KuroganeFai community)
Pairing: Fay/Kurogane
Rating: NC17
World: Outo
Spoilers: none
Summary: Fay discovers that all four of the travellers share a birthday of 1 April, and decides to give Kurogane a "special present" for their birthday.
Disclaimer: CLAMP kindly lets us abuse play

Comments

[seeliespright]

Wah!

I didn't even think about specifying in my email what their clothes would be (and I certainly didn't think about the inconsistency of time). We wrote as if contemporary with the latest chapters, but the clothing was that of Outo (and so was the kitchen, since I can't imagine Fay making Kurogane pancakes in Nippon).

[arkray]

Yay!!!! Great art!!!! I see you had problem trying to 'define' the clothes XDDD that was the funnier part XD I love the image with the PuppyKitty sing XDDDD

[seeliespright]

Yeah, I was able to work it out just fine for our edited version, but we were inconsistent in the composition. I took editorial control, and hopefully people didn't mind it too much.

I'm sad more people haven't commented. T_T I do hope they went to the download and got it at least.

[seeliespright]

Yeah, I looked on the download page yesterday and saw that 45 people had downloaded the file, so I was much happier.

I was concerned that people hadn't gotten the file, and not so much eager for positive comments. (I just thought to check the MediaFire page yesterday on a whim, hoping that they kept statistics of who downloaded the file... and they do.)

[snowaltz]

Thanks for the wonderful drawing, I love it!

I'm glad that many members enjoyed this activity, I believe we will have more activities to come ;)

maybe with more words each next time?
Will take that into consideration =) About how many words do you think will be better?

[snowaltz]

Ah.. Actually the fewer number of words is so that it's easier for the writer to count. But I agree that more words allow more flexibility =)

Oh yes, I was trying to keep tabs whether which clothing was already off while writing =P

[seeliespright]

Or keep tabs of what clothing they'd had in the first place...

[snowaltz]

Hehe, true. But I must say it all worked well in the end! =D

[seeliespright]

yup, beautifully

[seeliespright]

I liked the 15 word limit. It forced you to be brief and to adapt quickly to changes the other writers presented. I like not having as much control over the course of the story and having others' ideas injected into the work.

So, one vote for keeping the 15 word limit. We could make a poll before starting the next story to decide if community members have mixed opinions.

[snowaltz]

We could make a poll before starting the next story to decide if community members have mixed opinions.
Yep, I was thinking about that too. Thanks for your opinion! =)