I'm Your Maid (Chapter 12)

[kuro_kakeru]

Title: I’m Your Maid

Author: secretagentman

Genre: Romance, Drama; Fluff, Comedy

Rating: PG-13

Summary: Name: Kim Kibum; Age: 18 years old. Data: One of POPULAR guys in the most prestigous school in Seoul~! Everyone wants to be his friend... But he has a secret that he doesn't want anyone to know... He works as a maid at the Lee's mansion. His

Comments

[rinni1905]

This chap is so heart-breaking. I understand how guilty Jinki would feel when he knew that he couldn't protect his love and make her die, but I think Jinki would value people at his side more after that incident, not spatting hurtful words to Kibum like that. But it's okay because he was a little out of control but since you could say that I was in the same situation like Jinki in the past, even worse and his attitude was some things I would never do. I know what lacking in Jinki now, it was mature. I'm really sorry to say this but it make him appeared really childish and unconvincing.

You know when I read your fic, I think Jinki just took Kibum's love for granted. And it make me feel unfair for Kibum, since he devoted and hurt so much, which was the reason why I felt strong impression with Kibum while Jinki was quite blur compared to him. I feel like Jinki was a coward, ack, why I use such strong word? But it was own his fault to push Kibum away and make him cry, thus drowning himself in much depression and sadness then dumped it on others' head. He should have known that there were still many people worried about him. There's nothing he could use to get an excuse, and that's what I hate Jinki in general. I know I shouldn't use my own experience, but for me, he was...

Anyway, I love your writing style, and the fic is really good and perfect. Believe me, your writing style has nothing to complain about, just Jinki make me so concerned since he was my bias and I want to see him in more than just this.

[kuro_kakeru]

Hmmm... I'm not quite sure about your opinion unnie... I guess that we have to look at Jinki's position in a different perspective. I understand that you've been in a quite similar position before but there are some factors that have been majorly different from yours. So I can't fully agree that Jinki may have been childish.

And I disagree that Jinki took Kibum's love for granted. As written on this chapter, Jinki is starting to get confused with what's been happening around him. And Jinki's been thinking that he likes Kibum, but not in a romantic way. And I quote again, "There's something in Kibum's eyes that's different." He's just starting to realize things romantically...

And the way he might have cared about Sun-young before affected him until the present... :)

Lol... just explaining my side. ^.^;; Let's not be too subjective~ hahaha