I'm Your Maid (Chapter 8)

[kuro_kakeru]

Title: I’m Your Maid

Author: secretagentman

Genre: Romance, Drama; Fluff, Comedy

Rating: PG-13

Summary: Name: Kim Kibum; Age: 18 years old. Data: One of POPULAR guys in the most prestigous school in Seoul~! Everyone wants to be his friend... But he has a secret that he doesn't want anyone to know... He works as a maid at the Lee's mansion. His

Comments

[rinni1905]

Yeah, I didn't fully die because of my homework, but I'm sure that it had some impact on me that make me easily piss off nowadays, but your fic literally make me feel better, and I think that you did great for this chap, I love the way you make everything become more gentle and happy for both Jinki and Kibum.

I love how you balanced the feeling in the fic and make it was so cute, the scene when OnKey went bungee jumping together is my most favourite scene in the whole fic, I think it would change their relationship and shift the fic in the new level.

You know, it would be a little soon to say this and I know I shouldn't say this, but I can't help myself. I don't know if everyone, or just me who feeling this way. That you didn't... make any improvement in your fic. I think I love your first writing fic more than the fic that you wrote recently. I know this is quite harsh and maybe you write ur fic just for fun, for relaxing and receiving criticized comment like isn't necessary. After you said that you hardly received any critic in your writing and you didn't really used to hear it from any readers, I stop commenting on your fic in seriously, thinking that it might be better if I let you just naturally write your fic. But after I read some of the authors that I had given criticized comment for them before, seeing how they improved themselves so much that I can't even recognized that they were writing not so good before. I can't help but talking this to you.

You know, everyone received feedbacks for their writing, the way you rejected advice is... really not good at all. If I didn't know you, I would let you write for all you want, because obviously it's not my business. However, since I know you so I should say this. I would love to see more strong and stable improvement from you, what you did manage to pull through in the few last chapters from "loveless matchmaker" is disappeared now. Everything needs passion to make it right, and I think you just didn't put enough effort into writing this, that's why I don't really want writers to challenge themselves with long fic when they're still not ready.

My advice you from now on is think positively with this comment. Take it like a grain of salt, and prove yourself that I've been wrong about you, okay?

[kuro_kakeru]

Unnie... I have never rejected any of your criticisms in the first place...

When I said that I rarely recieve them... It doesn't mean that I reject them... I take them but I react awkwardly...

And... Honestly, I've put more effort and passion into writing this... Just so you know...