Beta Reader?
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Introductory Paragraph
Thesis: Does getting "Hopeless Romantic" On One Facebook *OMG wHAT's yOUr LOVESTYEL!!!* quiz and then "Too Logical and Cold* on another mean I'm screwed up, the quizzes or screwed up, or I've been procrastinating so long on my AP Environmental lab that it's actually warped my brain?
1. Submitting to Scholastic Art & Writing Awards.
a. http://www.artandwriting.org/
b. Going for the short stories. (Though one of my friends is doing a whole portfolio)
c.Poetry?
2. Needs a Beta?
a. I get really anal and perfectionist about stuff like this.
b. Pretty pretty please? (You know who you are being talked to here!)
3. Alice Blue Has Not Gotten Back To Me Yet
a. Oh well. I still like them. Not bitter at all. Seriously! They're really good. Everyone look them up!
b.http://www.alicebluereview.org/
c. Also thinking of sending stuff to Open Faced Sandwich, Mad Hatter Review, and McSweeney's Lists
4. Sufjan Stevens Is Actually Pretty Good
a. The Preditory Wasp of The Palisades Is Out to Get Us ~ Love this song to death.
b. John Wayne Gacy Junior - Love the 'Oh My God' in this. The rest I can give or take.
c. Don't listen to Chicago. It's kind of crap.
5. Dostana Was Amazing
a. I'm wearing a sari to prom.
i. This is probably a bad idea.
ii. reason ~I'm really white.
iii. I'm probably going to get a really dark sari, dark red or purple, wine colored and black.
iv. Do you have to be fitted for a sari?
v. I think that wearing a dark sari would make me really washed out, but what if I go for washed out? Really dark lips and eyes and such?
vi. Would wearing a bindi be offensive?
vii. What if I dye my hair a dark wine color, too? Let it go long and wavy.
b. alicepotato and I must go into the city way more often. Seriously. Really good.
a. I tried to explain it to one of my friends and said 'Like Chuck and Larry?" and I said, "Not exactly". Then I told him about how revolutionary it was for Bollywood, and how amazing the audience was and he said, "That's really cool. But my god. What if our great revolutionary movie was a remake of Chuck and Larry?" and I said, "It's not at all like Chuck and Larry." Then I thought about it and I said, "Dostana was so good I don't think I would mind.
6. The Story and Random Thoughts on Rahm Emmanuel
a. Is about love
i. This doesn't really have anything to do with Rahm Emmanuel. But he's ridiculous anyway. Don't know how I fee about him as a political figure, but as a character I adore him already.
7. I Really, Really Can't Wait For Thanksgiving.
In Conclusion: The air is cold. Venus and Neptune, both, in the south at the cusp of sunset. We see them bright on our breath. I miss your fingers, longboned and low.
Introductory Paragraph
Thesis: Does getting "Hopeless Romantic" On One Facebook *OMG wHAT's yOUr LOVESTYEL!!!* quiz and then "Too Logical and Cold* on another mean I'm screwed up, the quizzes or screwed up, or I've been procrastinating so long on my AP Environmental lab that it's actually warped my brain?
1. Submitting to Scholastic Art & Writing Awards.
a. http://www.artandwriting.org/
b. Going for the short stories. (Though one of my friends is doing a whole portfolio)
c.Poetry?
2. Needs a Beta?
a. I get really anal and perfectionist about stuff like this.
b. Pretty pretty please? (You know who you are being talked to here!)
3. Alice Blue Has Not Gotten Back To Me Yet
a. Oh well. I still like them. Not bitter at all. Seriously! They're really good. Everyone look them up!
b.http://www.alicebluereview.org/
c. Also thinking of sending stuff to Open Faced Sandwich, Mad Hatter Review, and McSweeney's Lists
4. Sufjan Stevens Is Actually Pretty Good
a. The Preditory Wasp of The Palisades Is Out to Get Us ~ Love this song to death.
b. John Wayne Gacy Junior - Love the 'Oh My God' in this. The rest I can give or take.
c. Don't listen to Chicago. It's kind of crap.
5. Dostana Was Amazing
a. I'm wearing a sari to prom.
i. This is probably a bad idea.
ii. reason ~I'm really white.
iii. I'm probably going to get a really dark sari, dark red or purple, wine colored and black.
iv. Do you have to be fitted for a sari?
v. I think that wearing a dark sari would make me really washed out, but what if I go for washed out? Really dark lips and eyes and such?
vi. Would wearing a bindi be offensive?
vii. What if I dye my hair a dark wine color, too? Let it go long and wavy.
b. alicepotato and I must go into the city way more often. Seriously. Really good.
a. I tried to explain it to one of my friends and said 'Like Chuck and Larry?" and I said, "Not exactly". Then I told him about how revolutionary it was for Bollywood, and how amazing the audience was and he said, "That's really cool. But my god. What if our great revolutionary movie was a remake of Chuck and Larry?" and I said, "It's not at all like Chuck and Larry." Then I thought about it and I said, "Dostana was so good I don't think I would mind.
6. The Story and Random Thoughts on Rahm Emmanuel
a. Is about love
i. This doesn't really have anything to do with Rahm Emmanuel. But he's ridiculous anyway. Don't know how I fee about him as a political figure, but as a character I adore him already.
7. I Really, Really Can't Wait For Thanksgiving.
In Conclusion: The air is cold. Venus and Neptune, both, in the south at the cusp of sunset. We see them bright on our breath. I miss your fingers, longboned and low.