TM Fic: Twister City (1x01 pt. 3 it's done OMG!)

[kseda]

Hey guys, remember back in OCTOBER when I put up part 2?

Title: Twister City, 1x01 Stormborne (3/3)
Author: kseda
Rating: PG-13
Characters: EVERYONE EVER (for a complete list see here)
Summary: Det. Wyatt Cain joins the Topeka PD, and finds out that solving crime may be the least of his problems. THIS PART: A meeting, another meeting, another meeting,

Comments

[gatechic]

*pounces*

"It's purple," Jeb stated.

"It's blue," Wyatt said.

Jeb looked at the plum-shaded front door and other detailing and shook his head. "It's got a lot of purple."

*snickers*

*huggles Jeb*

[kseda]

In case you hadn't seen it: the house in question. Oh JEB.

Thanks, glad you liked it!

[annehiro]

... What the hell, is Jeb colorblind? That house is blue.

[kseda]

Jeb's 14 and a bit of a tool, so...

[erinm_4600]

It is purple, with blue accent!

O.o

[gatechic]

I hadn't seen the house before, but OMG! *pets Jeb*

[gatechic]

*SQUEE* It's finished!

Broody 14-year-old versus that house. I adore it but see why Jeb has to take the opportunity to jab at his father. "Mom would have found a nice house." Sheesh, how long before the school says he needs therapy?

And I love Ambrose arguing to keep the new body that showed up. "We'll get rusty." LOL

Speaking as a reforming-TV-junkie, I think you hit all the right notes for a successful first episode that people will keep watching. Can't wait to see where it goes between this and the Christmas episode.

Read Free!
KLCtheBookWorm

[kseda]

how long before the school says he needs therapy?

I'd give it a month *snort* Oh, Jebbycakes, I love you and your sullen mopeyness.

Very glad you enjoyed this, and stuck around logn enough to see it through :D Odds of me doing another complete episode are slim (I seem to be allergic to plot) but there will be stuff to fill the gaps!