Baa. BAA.

Aug 24, 2008 17:42

Request any fic of mine and I will provide you with a commentary/annotations, like a DVD extra.

My ego, let me show you it?

meme: fic

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erinm_4600 August 24 2008, 21:47:19 UTC
Gah! This means I have to read your crap

*goes to see your collected works*

Without Hinges, Key, Nor Lid

GO!

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kseda August 24 2008, 22:02:01 UTC
Will do!

Also: WAUGH. Read "Birds" now. GO!

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erinm_4600 August 24 2008, 22:02:56 UTC
Make me!! :p

*goes*

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kseda August 24 2008, 22:25:39 UTC
And here's your requested commentary:

One, two, three, four...[The number of eggs was directly proportional to hitting the 100 word mark. True story.] was that enough? Too few? Too many? Why was he doing this again? [Oh, Glitch.]

"Is this right?" he asked the very patient hen whose nest he was pilfering. She made no sound, just peered back at him with her beady eyes glinting in the moonlight. [I see him as a lover of animals, and they trust him in return. Also it amuses me that he ends up being associated with chickens so much in fic.]

Wait, why was he talking to a chicken, and what was... oh! Eggs!

"Thank you!" he whispered and ducked back out of the coop, hoping the farmer would not hear the frantic pounding of his heart. [Prompt use; I imagine his pulse was all Glitch could hear while making his escape.] Eggs meant food, and he was so hungry and...

...and he had no idea what to do with them.

[I sorta set this not long after the headcasing, which is why he's extra-scattered. All the instincts are there but the point a-point b ( ... )

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verilyverity August 24 2008, 21:57:26 UTC
And No Birds Siiiiing!

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kseda August 24 2008, 22:02:19 UTC
YAY! Noted!

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annehiro August 24 2008, 22:05:43 UTC
I second And No Birds Sing!

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