Fic: Someone I've Been Missing (The Better Half of Me) (5/?)

[kschoiceofafi]

Quinn groans before turning on her side and away from her tormenter. “Has Rachel returned any of my calls yet?”

Santana picks up her phone off her nightstand and runs through it. “Nope. But you have four text messages from Chloe and Ashley.”

“I don’t care,” she whines. “I just want Rachel to call.” She flings the covers away from her body,

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[jacketweather]

I love Santana quickly perforating the flimsy reasoning behind Rachel wanting to practice that particular scene. Santana is just the top of her bitchy game in this chap. I also love how needy and whiny Quinn is in this chapter. Her raspy "you're here" to Rachel when she finally visits is just the cutest thing ever.

I'm really glad to learn that Quinn isn't nearly as skanky as we might be led to believe. I'm also relieved to know that Quinn didn't actually go through with sleeping with that girl. Even drunk Quinn knows how much she's implicitly promised Rachel. I also love that sick Quinn is too tired to play games and just lays all of her cards on the table.

I died laughing when Rachel gets choked up and says that she hates the flowers and chocolate. I also loved the line about Quinn waiting for death to take her.

That was just an adorable chapter. Quinn is just so unabashedly pathetic and needy and whiny and openly romantic when she's that sick. I like that she was finally able to get Rachel to shrug off all of her armor. It's easy to be vulnerable when the other person is just as vulnerable too, I guess.

Long comment, dang.