Help please >.

[krystalkatz]

Not an update :)
I really want to be able to improve my fics so please tell what areas i suffer in, i already know i have poor spelling and grammar but if there is anything else please tell me as i really do want to improve, its possible for you to leave anon comments if you wish xD
thank-you very much 
Krys ^.^

Comments

[riidaaisbest]

Hmm. I think you're rather creative with the plots for your stories. There are a few things I think would be good to tweak a bit though

[krystalkatz]

xD
>.< i am very sorry about the amount of swearing in my fic's but when i write yankee or gangster type characters i always tend to base them on the ones in my area who do swear a lot >.< but i will try and calm it down a little :)
As for sex, i agree that recently i have been adding a lot of nc17 bits and i have been trying to calm them down, and i will continue to do so xD
Thank-you very much i didn't find it rude at all it was very helpful :)
Krys ^.^

[ann_liz]

Hello!
I'm french and I'm really bad in english but I love you're fic. Stories are original and I'm waiting each day you're new chapters.

Bye!

[krystalkatz]

xD you very much, i'm really happy that you enjoy them
Krys ^.^

[gambitsfox]

Well, like you said grammer and spelling are the only things I see. (And that only once in a while.) I think your characterization of your subjects is great and their dialogue is really good. Storylines are very interesting and vary enough not to sound alike. All in all I think your doing a top notch job!

[krystalkatz]

I promise that i will try and improve my spelling and grammar >.< but i am happy that over all you like them but if you do think of anything :)
Thank-you very much xD
Krys ^.*

[platinum28]

I think it'd make it easier for people to read if you grouped in them into more clear paragraphs, reading massive blocks of text with no white space can be a bit hard sometimes. Just be careful with your punctuation and capitals as well. :") Must be difficult to edit via iPod though...

[krystalkatz]

:D ah thank-you, a few people have said that so it is something I promise to work on xD as well as punctuation.
Thank-you this was very helpful xD
Krys ^.^

[dorayaki_chan]

Woow this is tough one since I love your works a looot X) I dunno if I can judge you fairly, so far I see nothing wrong with your fic , it,s quite enjoyable to read . Maybe I can tell you later on when I see something is kinda off :) sorry there were not much I can do to help u here :)

[krystalkatz]

xD i'm glad that you enjoy them
Please if you do think of anything tell me xD i won't mind
Thank-you very much
Krys ^.^