"Jungle Heat" SGA (1/1)

[kristen999]

Title: “Jungle Heat” (1/1

Comments

[purple_cube]

This is a lovely story with great imagery. I really enjoyed your Teyla voice and both her and John's characterisations.

[kristen999]

Thank you. I wanted to go for something sweet and I'm glad it reflected that.

Kristen

[infinimato]

There's something very sweet and warming (no pun intended) about this. I like it muchly.

[kristen999]

Thank you. I was going for just a reflection of sorts.

[tielan]

Skin-swimming! John/Teyla friendship-and-UST! Beautiful!

I love your descriptions and the way they interact, both the professional and the friendly and the almost-intimate.

Would you consider posting a link to this over at john_teyla?

[kristen999]

Thank you. I wanted to play with imagery and a sense of subtleness. I'll try to post it over at the other com sometime today.

[kristen999]

Thank you. I don't think them as a couple either. I think we've all at one point or other had a thought or two about some one who is a close friend or off limits. This was my little introspective way of getting in Teyla's head when she had one of those moments. Hehee hard not to, with John taking his clothes off :-P

Kristen

[bbuttercup]

Excellent story :o)

[kristen999]

Thank you