Fic-H50 When the Ocean Meets the Shore (1/3)

[kristen999]

Title: When the Ocean Meets the Shore
Author kristen999
Word Count: 25,000
Warnings/Rating R for language and scenes of violence
Spoilers: Set in season one, but no spoilers.
Genre: Gen. Drama, Action, H/C
Summary:Some cases are personal. Others become an obsession. The death of a friend leads Steve and the team on a collision course with his past, the

Comments

[kitmerlot1213]

Steve is truly lucky to have such a good friend in Danny and I hope one day, Steve's able to talk to his friend about his pain.

[kristen999]

Steve has been locks to many doors and he's open a few for Danny in the show and I hope we'll see more of him letting Danny in as time goes on.

Thank you :D

[sherry57]

Such joy...your story is here!!!! Happy dancing!! Great first chapter hon....runs off to read the next one....happy dancing on the way!
And three cheers for a great lead up to the start of season 2 on Monday!!

[kristen999]

EEeeeeee! Glad you're happy dancing through the chapters :D

[diane_c]

I got so excited when I saw this long story from you, 'cause I love your writing. :) My first thought was to save this to read on a little mini-vacation I'm taking in 2 weeks, but that resolve lasted about 2 minutes and here I am, at the end of part one. It's excellent!

[kristen999]

Eeeeek. Glad to have broken your resolve...I think :-P

Hope you enjoy the rest!

[tridget]

Wonderful! Between the writing and the details, the story is completely immersive. The characterization is very rich, too, and the psychological nuances perfect.

There's a great balance here in the story - the investigation of a current case, past issues for Steve and solid friendship between Danny and Steve and it all weaves together so well.

I sense the real storm has only just begun for them.

[kristen999]

Thank you so much hon!

This was a pretty layered story and I really tried to weave in some subtle details without bogging it down because the key for me was some emotional payoff.

I hope you enjoy the rest :D

[_thelostcity]

I'm loving this so far. On to the next parts!

One tiny thing, though. When you first describe Jackson you say "First Class Petty Officer" and it should be "Petty Office First Class".

[kristen999]

Thank you. Hope you enjoy the rest.

One tiny thing, though. When you first describe Jackson you say "First Class Petty Officer" and it should be "Petty Office First Class".

Fixed! Thanks :D