Fic SGA- Tour de Pegasus

[kristen999]

Title: "Tour de Pegasus"
Author: kristen999
Recipient's name:tielan
Rating: PG-13
Genre:Gen-Understated H/C
Words: 4,500
Warnings: None
Summary: After the hardships of the Pegasus Galaxy, Ronon and John go in search of its wonders. But what are they really seeking?

For thesatedan_grabass John and Ronon Thingathon.

Notes: I wanted to thank mischief5 for her wonderful suggestions and

Comments

[kriadydragon]

That was gorgeous! So much to love about this - the spontaneous exploration, aliens worlds that are alien, Ronon and John friendship, Ronon and John finding peace of mind in ways that are so them.

Loved, loved, loved this!

[kristen999]

Thank you. When I got the prompt, I was excited abut creating some alien worlds :D

[melagan]

What a lovely, rich story. You captured the friendship between these two beautifully.

[kristen999]

Thank you so much. I wanted something layered.

[tridget]

Oh, how beautiful! The landscapes of the planets were incredible. The story portrayed a rich and complex friendship. There was so much depth underlying the dialogue and gestures. The small glimpses into prior events managed to tell a whole tale of their own, too It was a touching search for peace of mind and a wonderful ending to this journey.

[kristen999]

Thank you. There were multiple story-lines going on and I'm glad none of them got lost in the vagueness, but I didn't want to spell out too much. :D

[sgafan]

I loved that! Great descriptions and imagination, girl! *applause*

[kristen999]

Thank you!

[gaffsie]

You capture their friendship so well. It's almost more lovely than the wonderful descriptions of the various planets that they visit together. ♥

Judging by what John Flanigan's been up to lately, I can't help but think that he'd be quite jealous of John and Ronon's adventures in Pegasus. *g*

[kristen999]

Thank you. I was playing with a lot of subtle elements and I'm thrilled how it came together.