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krisherdown

tennis slash - Clandestine

Dec 23, 2012 15:25

Title: Clandestine ( Read more... )

tennisfic, spaniards

Comments 11

hahahahagas December 23 2012, 21:38:13 UTC

Love it!!! And would not be at all mad if there was a sequel :)

krisherdown December 24 2012, 14:20:39 UTC

Glad you enjoyed. Not sure if there will be a sequel - so many other things I should be writing - but you never know.

liroa15 December 24 2012, 00:03:52 UTC

Oh, Ferru. Feli is never a good choice. Never.

krisherdown December 24 2012, 14:21:06 UTC

This is quite true. :)

Glad you enjoyed.

halotolerant December 24 2012, 11:41:44 UTC

Oh, I love it! Mmmmmm and also yum *g* Love the tangled Armada dynamics and that you brought in the Davis Cup, and David waiting patiently and not being demanding (so very him) and then Rafa coming to offer a better solution for both of them *g* So many lovely lines:
“You’re going to be the voice of reason here? The guy who’s drinking using leftovers from a relationship with a guy who is happily married.”
“Mind if I speculate on how an encounter with Feli usually goes?” (so hot!)
That the habit of putting a towel in your mouth SO TRUE! Oral fixation!
You deserve to be where you are right now in your life
Love that in particular. Oh David *hugs him* Oh Rafa *hugs him too*
What a great fic and it made me so happy! Thank you for picking this prompt *g*

krisherdown December 24 2012, 14:56:34 UTC

So happy you like it. :) As soon as I saw the comment in your prompt about the #1 Spaniard, I just knew I wanted to somehow use that aspect. Rafa was the only one I could see spelling it out. (side note: it'll be very interesting how David fares if he ends up in that position)

That said, I couldn't figure a way for David and Rafa to go from the talking to the hookup so describing a Feli encounter fit. Thank you!

meobnal December 25 2012, 07:12:18 UTC

I love Rafa being the one showing the proper 'appreciation' of Ferru ;)

...Feli, you dirty slut ::haha::

krisherdown December 26 2012, 21:34:48 UTC

Rafa is the only one who could be so honest about it :) but, yeah, Feli is such a user. Glad you enjoyed.

_runningmascara December 26 2012, 04:12:40 UTC

i can't believe i am saying this... but i like rafa in this? lol. he's totally the voice of fucked up reason and i love how he just tells it like it is.

poor david :( he always gets neglected :(

great fic!

krisherdown December 26 2012, 21:35:46 UTC

Rafa is earnest and honest to a fault... which is exactly what David needed. Glad you enjoyed.