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krisherdown

tennis slash - The Unlucky Roger Federer (10)

Aug 27, 2008 16:33

Title: The Unlucky Roger Federer (10)
Author: Kris S.
Fandom: Tennis RPS
Pairing: Roger Federer/Andy Roddick
Other Characters: Mirka Vavrinec, Marat Safin
Disclaimer: This definitely did not happen.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: AU. What if Roger Federer wasn't the great champion? What if his career was plagued by injuries, bad luck and constantly losing to a ( Read more... )

russians, switz, tennisfic, series: unluckyroger, americans

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krisherdown August 28 2008, 14:15:17 UTC

Well, Roger has to realize what's in front of him in order to get lucky. Glad you enjoyed.

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krisherdown August 28 2008, 14:17:11 UTC

There may be a possible confrontation scene ;) More soon to come.

slyreflection August 27 2008, 23:02:52 UTC

*Squishes down my Marat!muse who is begging to be allowed to seduce Roger. XD*
It seriously amuses me that Roger feels completely comfortable in Marat's arms, leaning against his shoulder, and yet he can't seem to wrap his mind around the fact that he's bi or gay or just attracted to Andy. XD
Okay, I am so liking the Marat-Mirka double team angle. I assume he wrote the note beforehand and she left (Or Andy?) it at Roger's door?
And the last line. Rocks. You even worked in Marat climbing the mountain! And it's funny but oddly fitting that Andy's just standing there doing something uncharacteristically domestic.
Nice update Kris! Thanks!

krisherdown August 28 2008, 14:25:22 UTC

It was difficult to suppress Marat's seduction. I hope to make up for that in later stories.
That Roger doesn't seem to realize something that is practically in bright neon is fun.

Marat and Mirka are a fun (platonic) pairing. He was about to appear in the chapter but then I remembered the mountain thing and saw it as a good exit for Andy/Marat.

Andy doing something domestic, yes, but shirtless at the same time :) Roger couldn't have it better.

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krisherdown August 28 2008, 14:26:03 UTC

Roger must now see what is in front of him, right? Hope to update soon.

amato August 28 2008, 07:41:33 UTC

At least Roger now in theory should start to get what's going on. although this is Roger so I guess it's possible it could take a while *waits to see what happens next*

krisherdown August 28 2008, 14:26:33 UTC

In theory, yes. Glad you're enjoying.