SGA fic - First Impressions Pt. 2

[kriadydragon]

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[everybetty]

Loved this look at Ronon new to the team but already bonding and teasing and caring... reminds me of that scene where Elizabeth sits with him at the cafeteria - he says he's leaving and she flips out on him- then he says he's just leaving the table. Creepy whump! but then creepy is one of the things you do best! Great job, M!

[kriadydragon]

Thanks! :D This was interesting to write since I tend to have a hard time writing in the earlier seasons, but it was fun exploring how they would have been around each other in those early days :D

[sherry57]

Great story! Going back to look at how it must have been for Sheppard and the others to get to know the very non-verbal Ronon was an excellent subject. The whole situation must have been strange for Ronon as well. At the end though, we begin to see the quiet humour of the big guy. The scene in the infirmary at the end was a really nice touch.
The whump....people in Pegasus just seem to love doing the most horrible things to our poor boy!
I loved the whole feeling of this story...it seemed low key like Ronon's communication while having so much adventure in it. Thanks hon.

[kriadydragon]

Thank you :D Yeah, Pegasus really does seem out to get our poor John *whistles innocently*

[padawan_aneiki]

Oh, this was a fun read! For the details mentioned by the other two. lol Ronon just starting to find his way, John trying to figure out what's goin' on in the big guy's head...then having their cakewalk go sideways...

Nice piece. :)

[kriadydragon]

Thanks! :D

[coolbreeze1]

This was fantastic! I loved how new Ronon was to Atlantis and the team, and John trying so hard to get to know him and whether or not he'd stay. The worm in the head thing was freakishly cool, and the image of the glass maze a very cool world for them to play in. Excellent! Thanks for posting!

[kriadydragon]

Thanks for readings :D It was interesting, going back and writing a fic set so many seasons ago, but fun as well - kind of like visiting an old friend.

[saphirablue]

I like stories which are set when Ronon was new in Atlantis. I like John's tries and attempts to get to know Ronon better.

Woah, that worm thing was creepy!

Thank you for this fic!

[kriadydragon]

Thank you for reading :D