SGA fic - Against the Cold

Jan 07, 2011 22:01

Title: Against the Cold
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Sheppard, Ronon, OCs
Warnings: Non-explicit mentions of abuse.
Summary: Comment fic for saphirablue who wanted John as a slave and lots of comfort, and Diane who wanted Ronon keeping John warm and the Marines stumbling onto them. So kind of two stories in one :D Edited but not beta'd.

Against the Cold )

stargate atlantis, fanfiction

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kazbaby January 8 2011, 04:45:45 UTC
God I so love John and Ronon's friendship. You really nailed it here and the fact that the Marines that serve with them know exactly what it takes to keep your team alive.

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kriadydragon January 8 2011, 04:48:34 UTC
Thanks:D John and Ronon friendship is the best. I adore writing fic where Ronon cares for/comforts John.

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dernhelm62 January 8 2011, 05:47:33 UTC
Loyalty and devotion. Ronon and Sheppard's friendship is so complex yet simple and you have captured it here. Humor was an intrigel part of SGA but sometimes trying to survive in the Pegasus galaxy is serious business. Thank you for a great story! Well done.

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kriadydragon January 8 2011, 06:09:29 UTC
Thank you :D I don't know what it is about angst that makes it something I tend to lean toward, more. SGA had some excellent angsty moments, but greedy me wanted more ;) I love any opportunity to write something a little dark and emotional.

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sherry57 January 8 2011, 06:38:32 UTC
I love Ronon taking care of Sheppard. I also love whump and the wonderful friendship between Ronon and Sheppard.....you got all of this in here so I love this story.

There's also the whole 'You don't leave a man behind' thing as well as the marines realising you do anything to help a team member, even heating them up with your body....so good. Thanks!

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kriadydragon January 9 2011, 04:41:20 UTC
Thank you :D Yeah, "Don't leave a man behind" really does entail a lot more than just not leaving a man behind. I love Ronon and Sheppard firendship stuff, because we know for a fact that they really would do anything for each other.

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saphirablue January 8 2011, 08:57:30 UTC
*squeee*

That was awesome!

I love Ronon rescueing a hurt, starved and on the end of his rope John and Ronon carrying John? Never gets old.

Also, the Marines?! Great! I love it!

Thank you very much for writing this! :)

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kriadydragon January 9 2011, 04:42:32 UTC
So glad you liked it :D I was having a bit of trouble with it, then saw the other prompt and, suddenly, it all came together. I really enjoyed writing it :D Especially since I seem to have a hard time writing slave!shep fic, even though I always want to :/

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tari_roo January 8 2011, 13:09:11 UTC
Its wrong that I wanted more of this, right? More slave!John. So good. Thanks for the great read.

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kriadydragon January 9 2011, 04:43:15 UTC
Thanks! :D I love slave!John stuff but have the hardest time writing it. It was fun to be able to finally get a slave fic down for a change ;)

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