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SGA Fic - Rule Number Four

Mar 02, 2010 14:55

Title: Rule Number Four
Rating: PG for language and very, very, very mild hurt.
Characters: John, Ronon
Summary: Tag to Broken Ties. "Rule number four, for the love of everything, if you value your life, never spar with Ronon when he's pissed." Written for susnn for the help_haiti auction. Hope you enjoy:D Many, many, many thanks to my excellent beta, wildcat88

( Rule Number Four )

stargate atlantis, fanfiction

Comments 47

jujuberry136 March 3 2010, 00:09:08 UTC

Ronon and John fic! Loved the whump, the look at hurt!Ronon and Rodney's indignation over his BSG dvds being threatened (it was such a perfect Rodney moment).

Thanks so much for sharing!

kriadydragon March 12 2010, 21:45:51 UTC

Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed.

jendavis March 3 2010, 00:29:25 UTC

THIS!!!

This is the followup they weren't nice enough to give us in the show. John's reasoning was spot on, as was McKay's, and Teyla's, and I've never been able to write disagreements like that. I'm in awe, here, quite happily so. :)

*bookmarks*

kriadydragon March 12 2010, 21:47:05 UTC

Thank you so much :D Yeah, I'd wished for a bit more aftermath as well, especially between Ronon and Sheppard, so enjoyed writing this for that reason.

titan5 March 3 2010, 01:21:11 UTC

Cool! Ronon acted just like I would expect him to act. I imagined he would carry a lot of anger after his time with the Wraith and that it would take a while to defuse. I can just see John offering to spar, no matter how risky that would be. The fight was well described, as was John's reaction to it, both physically and mentally. Rodney was perfect, not being able to keep his mouth shut. Nice and very appropriate addition to the episode.

kriadydragon March 12 2010, 21:51:50 UTC

Thanks! :D I figured it would be a while, a long while, before Ronon felt whole again and I really enjoyed being able to explore it.

tinypenny March 3 2010, 01:22:31 UTC

Wonderful story! I like how John would put his body on the line in an attempt to help Ronon...what a true friend!

kriadydragon March 12 2010, 21:53:57 UTC

Thank you. John really would do anything for his team :D

jlnyr March 3 2010, 02:22:58 UTC

I really enjoyed this story. It was great to see the relationship between John and Ronon. Always love it :-)

kriadydragon March 12 2010, 21:54:15 UTC

Thank you :)