SGA Fic - Dave's Brother

Jan 08, 2010 16:06

Title: Dave's Brother
Rating: PG for language, hints of past violence and mentions of ill family member
Characters: John, Dave
Summary: You may not have to like them, but you still have to love them. After being severely injured, John stays with his brother to heal. Dave's POV.

A/N: Written for x_erika_x for the sgahcchallenges Hurt/comfort Comment Fic exchange. Prompt ( Read more... )

stargate atlantis, fanfiction

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jujuberry136 January 9 2010, 00:47:33 UTC
I love this. Dave's POV made so much sense. I love that John's trying to be a better brother (the handmade bowl was a great touch) and Dave's really conflicted, he wants to know about John but at the same time, once he knows he can't unknow (if that makes any sense at all).

Thanks for sharing!

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kriadydragon January 9 2010, 06:30:21 UTC
Thanks for reading :D I've been wanting to do a Dave and John story for some time. Not so much a story in which they make up and all is well, but to show that they are on their way back to being brothers again.

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Dave's brother anonymous January 9 2010, 01:49:18 UTC
Very nice. I like the John and Dave storyline. I like the universe in which they do repair their relationship and bond. Loved their history of having spent a year following their mother's death comforting each other by holding hands as they slept, and to see that repeated as Dave tried to soothe John's bad dreams. Very sweet. -Diane

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Re: Dave's brother kriadydragon January 9 2010, 06:32:52 UTC
Thank you :D I always felt that the end of Outcast, when Sheppard walks into Dave's hom, to be the beginning of setting things right between and and it's something I've been wanting to expand on for a while. That and explore more of John's background.

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writerjc January 9 2010, 01:54:28 UTC
Love this! I've been mentally squeeing since you volunteered for this prompt. A great response. Thanks for writing it! :)

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kriadydragon January 9 2010, 06:33:19 UTC
Glad you enjoyed :D

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kriadydragon January 9 2010, 06:33:38 UTC
Thanks for reading :D

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ameshinju January 9 2010, 02:10:51 UTC
OMG! I love this!
Poor John, I would have freaked out if someone came into my room like that, I can only imagine how freaked out John must have been after what he'd been through.
And poor Dave, wanting to know, but not wanting to know. How do you not worry after seeing something like that.
Exellent story!
Thank you!

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kriadydragon January 9 2010, 06:34:59 UTC
Thanks! :D I do love to freak our poor boy out when I can ;)

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