This makes me happy for so very many reasons. Mostly because you got the characters right, which means that the scene is wonderful, believable, wonderful, funny, and did I mention wonderful? Bravo!
And there's that off-colour remark she'd expected earlier, combined with something in the way that he looks at her that she really doesn't know what to name. UNFFFF! Yeah :)
Of course he has to turn at the door as she's looking in the general area of his ass. He coughs and she quickly glances up to meet his too-pleased expression. "Purely medical reasons," she says, wishing, not for the first time, that he didn't fluster her so easily.
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"So you were staring at my ass."
"Purely for medical reasons." He gestures at her knee with both hands.
HEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! Touche Deeks! Touche! Bwahahahahaha!
And there's that off-colour remark she'd expected earlier, combined with something in the way that he looks at her that she really doesn't know what to name. UNFFFF! Yeah :)
Of course he has to turn at the door as she's looking in the general area of his ass. He coughs and she quickly glances up to meet his too-pleased expression. "Purely medical reasons," she says, wishing, not for the first time, that he didn't fluster her so easily.
"Do I need to take my shoes or pants off?"
OMIGOSH! *CACKLES SOOOOOO HARD!!!!*
Great work with the banter! :)
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