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I'm going to start writing fictions on my page, tell me your opinions
Miyako POV:
The rhythm of the music traveling through our bodies as we dance, you wrapped your hands around my waists swaying along with the beat.
"How long do I have to wait?" I thought. You brought your mouth close to my ears and blew into it. After you brought me into a corner and brushed our lips together. You licked the bottom of my lip to find the entrance. Once you managed to to slip it in. Somehow a moan escaped from my mouth. "You're so cute Miya-chan." You complimented. All I did was blush. After 5 minutes you brought me into our room. "Nee Miyako-chan are you ready?" You asked? I shrugged my shoulders, You gave me a soft kiss on the lips, then dragged my to the bed. I suddenly pulled away. "What's wrong?" You asked. "I don't want to, I'm not ready." I told you. "Why we've been together for 6 months." You reminded. "I know but I don't want to lost my percious womanhood yet, we're not even married." I said. Narrowed eyes follwed by a smirked were glaring at me with anger. "I don't give a damn, I just want to screw you and get it over with." You smirked. The tank top I was wearing was yanked off, the pants that was fit snuggly on my waist was ripped off. Now I was left in my undergarments. "What the hell are you doing Satomi?" I shreiked. "what does it look like?" You said while returning from the drawer with a rope. I layed there in horror "Is he going to rape me?" I thought. He came closer and grabbed my hands. I gave you a gruesome kick in the stomach-- but it wasn't enough. When you tried to attemp the same action again, you became pissed.
-SLAP-
I've slapped you in the face with a scratch to your cheeks, a red liquid was strolling down. "YOU DAMN BITCH." You yelled. A stream of my hair was pulled, and I was thrown acrossed the floor. "Shit, my back!" I moaned in pain. "Now where were we Miyako?" You asked as I was being picked up and dropped on the bed. I moaned in pain as our lips were being crushed together. Your fingers were roaming my body until it found my breast. You began fondling with my nipples. "Damn it, how can I get away from him?" I panicked. My eyes searched the whole room until I found something that caught my interest. I managed to grab it. and slammed it again your head. You winced in pain from my action. I took the time to push you out, grabbed my stuff and ran out of the room. It was midnight when I run out of the house. I ran doen the street trying to get away soon as possible, when a tall figure blocked me from continuing. "What's wrong?" the person said. Tears of joy, sorrow and fright were strollong down my cheeks. I looked up when thr man brought me n a embrace. "Come with me, I'll take you home." I nodded my head furiously. "Take me with you." I said. He picked me up as tring to comfrot me. as the moon was ascemdingup into the sky I know my day would change today.
It was trying but I did it. What are your opinions about it?
Miyako POV:
The rhythm of the music traveling through our bodies as we dance, you wrapped your hands around my waists swaying along with the beat.
"How long do I have to wait?" I thought. You brought your mouth close to my ears and blew into it. After you brought me into a corner and brushed our lips together. You licked the bottom of my lip to find the entrance. Once you managed to to slip it in. Somehow a moan escaped from my mouth. "You're so cute Miya-chan." You complimented. All I did was blush. After 5 minutes you brought me into our room. "Nee Miyako-chan are you ready?" You asked? I shrugged my shoulders, You gave me a soft kiss on the lips, then dragged my to the bed. I suddenly pulled away. "What's wrong?" You asked. "I don't want to, I'm not ready." I told you. "Why we've been together for 6 months." You reminded. "I know but I don't want to lost my percious womanhood yet, we're not even married." I said. Narrowed eyes follwed by a smirked were glaring at me with anger. "I don't give a damn, I just want to screw you and get it over with." You smirked. The tank top I was wearing was yanked off, the pants that was fit snuggly on my waist was ripped off. Now I was left in my undergarments. "What the hell are you doing Satomi?" I shreiked. "what does it look like?" You said while returning from the drawer with a rope. I layed there in horror "Is he going to rape me?" I thought. He came closer and grabbed my hands. I gave you a gruesome kick in the stomach-- but it wasn't enough. When you tried to attemp the same action again, you became pissed.
-SLAP-
I've slapped you in the face with a scratch to your cheeks, a red liquid was strolling down. "YOU DAMN BITCH." You yelled. A stream of my hair was pulled, and I was thrown acrossed the floor. "Shit, my back!" I moaned in pain. "Now where were we Miyako?" You asked as I was being picked up and dropped on the bed. I moaned in pain as our lips were being crushed together. Your fingers were roaming my body until it found my breast. You began fondling with my nipples. "Damn it, how can I get away from him?" I panicked. My eyes searched the whole room until I found something that caught my interest. I managed to grab it. and slammed it again your head. You winced in pain from my action. I took the time to push you out, grabbed my stuff and ran out of the room. It was midnight when I run out of the house. I ran doen the street trying to get away soon as possible, when a tall figure blocked me from continuing. "What's wrong?" the person said. Tears of joy, sorrow and fright were strollong down my cheeks. I looked up when thr man brought me n a embrace. "Come with me, I'll take you home." I nodded my head furiously. "Take me with you." I said. He picked me up as tring to comfrot me. as the moon was ascemdingup into the sky I know my day would change today.
It was trying but I did it. What are your opinions about it?