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Second Best -- Chapter 8

Nov 20, 2009 17:43

Over the next few weeks, Jordan was exceptionally sweet to Adam, going out of his way to pamper him with unexpected gifts and romantic surprises. He seemed anxious to prove to Adam that his shocking behavior had been nothing more than a fluke - a momentary lapse in judgment caused by his panic at not knowing whether or not Adam was safe. He ( Read more... )

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nannerz2cool November 21 2009, 00:11:00 UTC

Ahhh, Adammmm! Come on, kiddo, don't be like this.

dreamsofspike December 1 2009, 05:19:35 UTC

yeah, he's slowly getting brainwashed into accepting the abuse :( thanx, love, glad you liked this one :) *Hugs*

saoirse0 November 21 2009, 01:09:29 UTC

He loves me. We’re gonna be all right. He loves me...

NOOOOO ADAM! D:

GAH! I CAN TELL THIS IS REALLY REALISTIC BY THE WAY EACH SCENE KILLS ME! I CAN ALSO TELL THIS WILL GET A HELL OF A LOT WORSE IN THE FUTURE. OMG. GREAT JOB! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART. :)

dreamsofspike December 1 2009, 05:20:33 UTC

awwww, thanx, hon, glad you're so into it and it seems realistic... yeah, its going to get worse for sure :(

norosegarden November 21 2009, 01:15:48 UTC

For the love of all things fluffy, let Adam reach out to someone else. Soon. PLEASE. I fucking HATE this Jordan character. I want to reach through my monitor and strangle him.

It's difficult to see Adam portrayed as this weak & vulnerable.

It's only a story. It's only a story. It's only a story.

Ok. Breathing.

dreamsofspike December 1 2009, 05:21:16 UTC

yeah, adam is being isolated from the other people who love him, and jordan is playing on his natural insecurities to keep him under control :( thanx so much, love, glad you're so into it :P

kterp November 21 2009, 01:46:43 UTC

You're killing me here. I can just feel the tension and danger building with each chapter. Making me really nervous just reading this. There had better be some good ass kicking at the end of this story. Thanks for sharing your talent. Good job.

dreamsofspike December 1 2009, 05:22:32 UTC

thanx so much, love, glad you liked this chapter :) i'm trying for that gradual build toward the badness :P don't worry, jordan will definitely pay... thanx, love :)

crybaby4u November 21 2009, 03:50:58 UTC

Adam BB I am worried 'bout you. You're excusing it all away. Classic! I don't wanna see you in a Farah Fawcett Buring Bed type of breakdown. *sigh* That damn Jordan is driving me nuts. I don't like that he is hurting Adam like this and making excuses for his behavior wrapped in his bull crap declarations of love.

Kris man oh man... what do I have to say about Kris. Well for one I understand what happened between him and Adam and it just makes me sad and every little glimpse of seeing Kris watch Adam from afar and feel the loss of the their friendship and the worry he has for Adam it breaks my heart.

Good chapter my dear...loved it.

I feel like that Charles Dickerson character from "Oliver Twist" and I just wanna be like "Please Sir...I want some more" because this story is so damn good.

dreamsofspike December 1 2009, 05:23:45 UTC

yeah, he's definitely falling into those classic abuse patterns D: thanx so much, love, glad you're so into it... and yeah, kris cares about him and loves him but has no idea how bad things are for him :( thanx so much for your kind, encouraging words, hon, i love your comments :)