All Good Things (A "Day Off Day" Series Continuation)

Oct 27, 2009 16:05


Title: All Good Things
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kradam, mentions of Kris/Katy & Adam/Drake
Word Count: 5,516
Author Says: Another un-beta'd piece. If you notice any mistakes, blame me & let me know, please! No, seriously, you'd better tell me. Also, I'm kinda mean to both our boys in this third installment of the whole "Day Off Day" series, but only in ( Read more... )

author: trueroyalty

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vernie07 October 28 2009, 14:22:02 UTC
That was heartbreaking to read. You could feel the want that they have for each in every word on this page. The time apart thing.. You could feel their heart breaking at just the thought of not being together. :(

"How am I supposed to- how can we not do this anymore?" Kris' plaintive voicing of both of their thoughts breaks Adam a little inside, and he wraps his arms around Kris as tight as they'll go without crushing the little guy. He ducks his head and mimics Kris' previous position, nose in the crook of Kris' neck, mouth barely grazing the top of his collarbone.

Adam shifts his face upward, lips placed pressureless between the crook of Kris’ neck and his collarbone. Kris’ hands, palms flat on Adam’s back, don’t so much grip Adam’s shirt, as seize stiffly and burn purchase right through to the skin beneath. Kris’ full-body shiver pushes his skin closer in to Adam's lips. In a moment of blind reaction, Adam rubs the tip of his nose along the softness of Kris’ neck before placing an actual kiss to it. Trying to keep contact, Kris leans into the kiss, and Adam moves his bottom lip to take in a fraction more space, the inside barely grazing skin, just enough to get Kris’ taste..... This is both sad because it's like they are both holding on for dear life and hot because you could feel the sexual tension between them.

And the ILU's at the end. Even more heartbreaking. Can't wait to read Adam's POV. I love this series.

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