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Second Best -- Chapter 3

Oct 23, 2009 05:34

( “Adam…” His voice was hoarse with desire and emotion. “… I don’t wanna be your… your drug of choice, just to numb yourself out for the night… and then have you forget about me tomorrow when you decide to keep… pining over him some more…” )

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crisanne07 October 23 2009, 15:49:10 UTC

i really like this chapter and cant wait for the next chap...pls write more:P

so exciting and so want to know how Adam - jordan
relationship can turned to be a nightmare for Adam

dreamsofspike October 29 2009, 06:16:52 UTC

i'm trying to make it as realistic as possible, and therefore the process is kind of a gradual one... at this point i'm hoping people will find jordan likable and seemingly a nice guy -- because that's how adam is seeing him...

thanx so much, love, glad you're liking this story :) the next chapter is up now, hope you enjoy it :)

tahsha13 October 23 2009, 15:49:47 UTC

I think this story might be be some of your best writing yet. The pace is excellent and all the characters are being really nicely developed. I adore how you have set up Jordan.

It's kind of ridiculous how much I want you to update this story like now.

dreamsofspike October 29 2009, 06:21:50 UTC

awwww, thanx so much, hon :) i'm trying hard to make the scenario realistic and really develop jordan... i'm glad it's working out :) thanx, glad you're enjoying it :) *hugs*

crybaby4u October 23 2009, 16:39:50 UTC

Excellent chapter. You have positioned Jordan nicely as the good guy. I would never see him doing Adam wrong he is so supportive. Getting over Kris is hard for Adam especially when Kris seems so unaffected. I cant wait for more of this. Amazing writing thanks so much.

dreamsofspike October 29 2009, 06:22:28 UTC

thanx, love, i'm glad you're enjoying it and can see jordan's appeal... adam wouldn't fall for him if he was obviously a bad guy :( thanx so much for your kind words... the next chapter is up now, hope you enjoy it :) *hugs*

krisherdown October 23 2009, 18:00:24 UTC

You are successfully keeping us reading hanging on your every word :)

Can't wait for the next part.

dreamsofspike October 29 2009, 06:27:05 UTC

thanx so much, love, glad you are enjoying it :) *hugs* the next chapter is up now, hope you like :)

j241985 October 23 2009, 19:12:33 UTC

I just want to see how something so nice can go bad. Love Adam's reaction to Kris though. It brought on a sick satisfied feeling for me.

dreamsofspike October 29 2009, 06:28:06 UTC

adam's just so vulnerable right now that it's easy for him to fall for someone who maybe *wasn't* as good at his act as jordan... and jordan's pretty darn convincing :( thanx so much, love, glad you liked the bit with the goodbye... that was stolen/inspired a *little* by real life :P the next chapter is up now, hope you enjoy it :)